Reviews for Deer
valkrus chapter 35 . 7/21
out of curiosity do you have problems discerning colors? I noticed how you called Monoma and Hawkes platinum haired instead of yellow or blonde
valkrus chapter 28 . 7/21
with how close the button A and E I take it that is why you tend to typed out Kei instead of Kai because there are parts where you typed Kai but other part Kei

BTW I read your warnings and I am just commenting on some mistakes you made so that you could fix it. It's not flaming hate or malicious just trying to help
valkrus chapter 24 . 7/21
since this is officially Shikamaru recarnating as Izuku Midoriya and possibly others in Naruto is in the same boat shouldn't this like a crossover with Naruto in a way like the fandom isn't just BNHA anymore it's BNHANaruto crossover instead of just BNHA

Also he mention seeing the similarities between his new friends and old I hope there's going to be a list saying who's is similar to who because Naruto ended years ago and I'm having a hard time recalling the figuring out who is who
valkrus chapter 12 . 7/21
I thought Neito Monoma is a blonde? platinum hair is kinda similar to white or silver hair isn't it?
valkrus chapter 7 . 7/21
little typo at the end here
It's YaoYorozu not YaoRoyozu
valkrus chapter 6 . 7/21
at one point in this chapter you accidentally mistyped Toshinori into Toshiro
valkrus chapter 5 . 7/21
not sure if this problem happened in the previous chapters but I noticed you keep misspelling Chisaki Kai into Chisaki Kei might want to take another look at any chapter that mention his name
sugarhigh chapter 7 . 7/19
I've always wanted to see a crossover fic of naruto and bnha with Shikamaru as the main character. Assuming it is him anyways? I mean all the clues point to him so,,,, SO REALLY I'M SO EXCITED TO READ MORE TBH. I'm just really enjoying reading so far so I can't help but comment! The carrying a deer plushie wherever he goes really makes me sad btw. I guess it's like a security blanket for him? It's sad to think about but I really like that you included that detail.
dude2865 chapter 22 . 7/19
How you stop being crazy after you die smh
EndlessChains chapter 45 . 7/16
A well done chapter. An interesting look into what MT. Lady was thinking about when she was facing against Gigantomachia. A formidable foe for her that is for sure as she knows that half of her allies are dead as well as injured due to Shigaraki. It was good to know that she wasn't alone in fighting him as Pixie Bob helped out. What the heroes were not prepared for it would seem was Kirishima making his way to Shigaraki as well as Izuku making it there as well. It will be interesting to read how this will all turn out. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 45 . 7/15
So I have no idea who izuku was in the past I'm assuming that it's an original story but even without knowing his past this is an amazing story and I love it so much -RayRayGirlSaysHi
(I am to lazy to login rn lol)
Wolfywuffy chapter 24 . 7/9
Honestly im so happy im right i guessed it was shikamaru because of the deer being the nara clan thing and the inteligence, lazy attitude, motivated when emotional and constantly saying "troublesome"
Vinyr chapter 4 . 7/7
Ah... I get it now... Shikamaru was basically given a second chance in life... And was reincarnated as Izuku Midoriya... Troublesome...
Vinyr chapter 1 . 7/7
... Well this certainly reminds me of Shikamaru from Naruto...
jonbomb007 chapter 24 . 6/6
OMG I WAS RIGHT
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