Reviews for Rose and her Clockwork
Guest chapter 7 . 4/27
Is she know a kinda weaker version of One punch man?
BashKetchup chapter 7 . 4/19
I like how this is going. Also in which you mentioned Jeff and Jane made an appearance, I have the hunch that the rest of the "Creepy Cast" will make it's way into the story. It will lead to some interesting interactions and how the world is affected by their presence. Why? Grimm. Anyways, enough speculation. I like how it's is written and you make it really engaging and enjoyable. Can't wait to see more!
Midnightwolf64 chapter 7 . 4/19
Nice chapter I didn't expect ruby and Glenda at the end for the suggestion have Clockwork mention the fight to ruby that's all I have for now so good luck with the next chapter and stay safe
b6076b6076 chapter 6 . 4/3
More please. I like this Ruby.
Beloved Nightmare Union chapter 6 . 2/14
Very nice chapter was everything I was hoping for with the encounter. So team wby actually do care about ruby, but they took her for granted, thinking she will always forgive them if they treat her like crap.

Hoping to see their thoughts on how ruby wiped the floor with them and her new brutal display of strength. Wonder if they are now afraid of her or angrier. Maybe they will start to realize what they took for granted and want to bring the old ruby back.

Admittedly I'm not too familiar with creepypasta, aside slender man ( wonder if he will show up?) Is jane like jeff?

Once again great work, am very much enjoying the story, hope to see more of ruby slowly becoming corrupted and her friends realizing what they have done.

thought some of the talks that jane and clockwork make me think if things will become more... explicit lol.
Midnightwolf64 chapter 6 . 2/12
This really great good job now I was thinking some aftermass with WBY in the infirmary, Goodwicth talking to Ozpin and other professors about what happened and to see what will happen with Natalie and Jane with Ruby too some brief interaction with other characters maybe team JNPR, team CFVY, maybe Cardin or Cinder that's all I can think of right now so keep up the good work
Videocrazy chapter 6 . 2/12
This is deliciously dark, and I eagerly await more. I love a good corruption fic, and this hits all the right notes. One note for this chapter: 'ice' is not a proper noun. Ice, icy, iceberg, etc. are not capitalized unless they're at the beginning of a sentence.
RebelKira chapter 6 . 2/12
Really enjoying this dark Ruby. Keep up the great work.
Eric Mead1 chapter 5 . 2/1
Cool
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
Hmm for the next chapter I was thinking there could be some blood drawn from ruby during teams discipline with Ruby's training with Natalie too in thereand maybe what's going to happen with Jane that Natalie called in chapter 4 that what had in mind so with that good luck with the next chapter and have a nice day
L0yalist chapter 5 . 1/31
I just expect WBY to be destroy but not killed.
gothboy.wxlf chapter 5 . 1/30
WBY will be shocked and mad (mostly Yang) because she left without notifying anyone and then Ruby will get mad and beat the shit out of them and then render WBY speechless as she scolds them. :) that’s what I am predicting to happen
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 5 . 1/30
Haha this was awesome.
Midnightwolf64 chapter 5 . 1/30
This chapter is interesting I didn't expect ruby to hug goodwicth for your next chapter since you want suggestions I was thinking you good add some blood shed with Ruby's discipline with her team with maybe the eye thing you did in this chapter too and maybe some people to watch/witness or stumble on it by accident the people I was thinking team JNPR, Ozpin, Glanda, Taiyang, Qrow the rest is up to you and maybe put in when Natalie called Jane in there since it's was in chapter 4 I want to see what you have plan for that and that's it for the suggestion it got so good luck with the next chapter
Beloved Nightmare Union chapter 5 . 1/30
Nice chapter as always, Didn't expect the encounter with cinder. It looks like even she is afraid of whatever clockwork has instilled into ruby.

Can't wait for team Wby reaction to ruby next!
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