Reviews for The World's Most Obvious Trap |
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violet lilaccs chapter 1 . 5/11 :D |
geekqueen2010 chapter 1 . 2/13 Very good! But, it'd be nice to see the final battle for this. Also, did you write the story I read about Marinette and Adrien going to the temple to see if they need training because the monks had the same names as that story. Or are there cannon names for the temple monks though the show hasn't brought the heroes to the temple yet? |
Silvanon of the Orchard chapter 1 . 12/30/2019 I could totally see that plan working. XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2019 This is great! |
Zelretch chapter 1 . 12/9/2019 Gabriel clearly never watched Star Wars... It's a trap! XD |
Swirlspot chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 Yeah, he totally would! Also glad to see focus on the restored temple. I hope season 4 gets into that now that Fu is gone. |
writeringoodfaith chapter 1 . 11/25/2019 Oh, he totally would fall for it. And I agree with all your comments on fanon over canon. Long live this! |
JuliaZ01 chapter 1 . 11/25/2019 Loved it! But please make a part 2! Don't leave me on a cliff hanger. |
mayuralover chapter 1 . 11/25/2019 All of that planning was super satisfying to read! Sucks for Adrien but... Oh well! Wonderful story! And very creative. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2019 Ah ... they talk about what they'd like to do now the job is done ... but not the /*first*/ thing they'd do. I imagine Chat would say, "My very first thing will be taking you out to dinner to celebrate, with no masks on." |
fvcr91 chapter 1 . 11/24/2019 Oh i want more of this story though It was a really good One-shot |
your 1 fan chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 nooo I need to know what happens next! :( You write the best stories, as always... keep workin your magic! Loved this one. |
EXCITED KITTEN chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 THIS IS AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE ADRIEN'S REACTION ALSO I LOVE YOUR CHARACTERIZATION OF NATHALIE |
Ana-M-A-P chapter 1 . 11/22/2019 Once again. You can't finish like this. We...I need to know what happens next. Pleaseeee. |
Winner321 chapter 1 . 11/22/2019 please write a little more! I love the start and am dieing about Adrian's reaction! |