Reviews for Frozen 3: Ashes
SoulreaverA113 chapter 1 . 7/22
Naaaisuuuue!
firestarpony chapter 7 . 7/14
I love it when Carolus is staring to trust Elsa a little bit and when heard Surtur is going to be the villain in this story I was surprise but it would be great if Elsa full in love just like anna did.
KingdomWarrior125 chapter 7 . 7/5
It’s very nice of Kristoff is being a father to Carolus. And I hope Elsa be a god mother to the fire tamer.
SORARULES23 chapter 7 . 7/5
Woah! That's interesting. Surtur the fire giant is a character in this story. Is he based on Marvel or myth?

Will Thor make an appearance?

Also i really like that Elsa is being maternal toward Carolus just like Anna and Kristoff is being a father.

I also like that Carolus is opening up and learning to trust Elsa.

Great work!
Heart of the Demons chapter 7 . 7/5
I really and truly like how well utilized Elsa's Eternal Winter is thanks to you. It made this chapter really hot on plot. I'll gladly wait on how you'll be able to further expand on it in the future.
KelseyAlicia chapter 7 . 7/5
God, I'm running for Your heart
I'm running for Your heart
Till I am a soul on fire
Lord, I'm longing for Your ways
I'm waiting for the day
When I am a soul on fire
Till I am a soul on fire
[x2]

Lord, restore the joy I had
I have wandered, bring me back
In this darkness, lead me through
Until all I see is You

God, I'm running for Your heart
I'm running for Your heart
Till I am a soul on fire
Lord, I'm longing for Your ways
I'm waiting for the day
When I am a soul on fire
Till I am a soul on fire

Lord, let me burn for You again
Let me return to You again
And Lord, let me burn for You again
And let me return to You again.

God, I'm running for Your heart
I'm running for Your heart
Till I am a soul on fire
Lord, I'm longing for Your ways
I'm waiting for the day
When I am a soul on fire

God, I'm running for Your heart
I'm running for Your heart
Till I am a soul on fire
I wanna be
Till I am a soul on fire
Till I am a soul on fire

I'm reading the last book of the Magnus Chase series by Rick Riordan, the guy famous for Percy Jackson. Since Magnus is Frey's son, I know this myth about him, the fire giant, and Ragnarok though I've known about Ragnorck long before hearing that legend.

Anna's son is a blessing. Even if he has fire powers, he's still a blessing. He's a miracle, and sometimes miracles take time to grow. But its the ones that need time to develop that are the ones to cherish the most.

A mother's love for her child is essential. Sometimes its not there other time it is. But when a mother truly loves her child, she'll do everything and anything for them.

Just because you give birth to a child doesn't make you a parent. Any dog can have a pup, but not everyone can be a parent. And real family isn't whose blood you share but the love you share. So yes, you can choose who you consider family even if you can't decide whose blood you share.

I heard that song on Alexa that my mental health workers gave me for video chats. I feel it's perfect for him. Also ever listened to the frozen parody of Let it go called Let it burn? That be cool too.

Overall, I love this chapter and where you are going with it!
firestarpony chapter 6 . 6/22
sorry again but when chapter 7 of story will be coming out July, august of September
let us know
firestarpony chapter 6 . 6/13
hey this is a great chapter
I hope that Carolus will get along with Elsa in the next chapter
and deal with the fire monsters
KingdomWarrior125 chapter 6 . 6/10
I should say that Elsa would be Carolus’s Godmother.
KingdomWarrior125 chapter 6 . 6/9
Wonder how Carolus feel about Elsa, after that little problem with the flames.
Heart of the Demons chapter 6 . 6/9
My most favorite part about the new chapter is the song that SORARULES23 came up with that helped to enhance the mood of the overall story. It literally blew my mind. You don't skimp on how the "Frozen" characters are handled; I found them (even Elsa) to be consistently relatable.
SORARULES23 chapter 6 . 6/9
If you see 'Pooh's Heffalump Movie', then you'll find out where the idea came from for 'Little Mr Flame'.

Also you're welcome for the song, I'm always happy to help.

Also Holy Smokes! That was a great chapter!

We'll Carolus warm up to Elsa in the next chapter?
KelseyAlicia chapter 6 . 6/9
This was a brilliant chapter! I love it long and detailed! Its so awesome! I love Anna being a mother here and that panther wow! Talk about nightmare fuel! This is beyond wonderful?!
jack taylor chapter 4 . 6/1
one thing to say who are these 3 frie monsters
jack taylor chapter 3 . 6/1
best story ever
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