yea so now I read it and I'm pretty sure that Thot will be Rayla's first kill... I really hope that Rayla will forgive him, I just want them to be happy... :c

I just finished reading this story! I REALLY look forward to reading more on Eye of the Storm! XD

Can't wait for season 5!

Wasn't expecting to find a decent Dragon Prince fanfic but you surprised me. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

Aha!

Pretty good.

And the magic in this universe kind of feels like one has to learn the 'true name' of the arcanum. To know the magic is to know every side of it. I wonder if that's why the cube has six sides? Because each arcanum interacts and affects with another, none can exist by itself or apart. Which is why in Callum's mindscape, to learn the Sky arcanum, he had to explore all of its facets. I'm def thinking too hard about this.

Oh well, thanks for writing!

Oh no!

This was a great chapter, by the way. This entire fic has been really good, actually, and you've managed to keep to the essence of the show. I hope S4 happens, irl.

Oooh, or what if Belt and Zeron are like the same person? Like astral projection, and illusions?

Haha, and you always save the 'nastier' bits for last. Definitely appreciate it. :)

Interesting. Belt and Zeron's intentions intrigue me. I hope they're not bad. Especially Belt - I hope he is just an oddball and not heading off to find Viren or something. And Zeron... I hope is just a very good spy.

I didn't even comment on that first remark made by Callum about dark magic, about how easy it is and how humans would gravitate towards that - so astute and like, well said.

And then... I think a morality test, or lie test, or I don't know, intelligence test, would have been good? Which is why I really liked the Bosor (?) guy, because he showed a bit of patience and cunning, and planning, which is always an asset in a group of warriors where they might rely heavily on adrenaline and instincts. Fighting prowess is good, and it is good to fight to your strengths, but the best should also be adaptable. Like when Rayla was put under pressure to face her water fear to do the right thing? It showed both how she acted under pressure, where her loyalties lay, and that she could adapt; was not stuck in her ways.

And then... what else? Ugh, yes, the dark mages. Gosh, as if the politics weren't enough. Now they'll have this to contend with as well. I guess they hold potential as the 'common enemy' the elves and humans can unite against, but still. I'm just tired of people needlessly chasing power. I think I have been spending too much time on cartoons and action and fantasy - time for some Studio Ghibli or something. ;) Haha, but yeah, I'm also really sad about Claudia. I mean, I didn't like her, per se, but she'd grown on my and she reminded me of like the Avatar trio (Azula, Mai, Ty Lee) rolled into one. And I really thought she was going to get her redemption arc. I wonder, do you think all dark mages go through a similar test of character or moral dilemma as Callum? Or was it just because he has such a good heart or already had a connection with an arcanum? Hmmh.

I'm ecstatic for Soren's though. What a relief! For all his jokes and bluster, he is a skilled fighter and he has a good heart. He is smart, I think, but I also think his idiot persona is his greatest asset - people will continue to underestimate him.

The question I also have, and I probably need to look this up, but it's like 00:37 and I'm going to forget, but does the fandom have any theories on Callum's father? I mean, I literally joined like two days ago... so.

Anyway, really great chapter. Which, I guess, is probably all you actually want to hear. ;)

Ugh, politics. Even dragons have to dirty their claws it seems. I always feel so frustrated when people can't just forgive or contemplate second chances or judge character instead of something as arbitrary as race or ethnicity. Oh well, lovely writing. And great characterisation.

Great job! This is really good.

Oh, this was fantastic! The characters were spot on, once again great pace, and the plot, indeed, thickens.

It hurts. Because well, this has already been written, so I want to enthuse and comment and, I guess, I'll just have to wait and see. Part of the fun, I guess. I am SOOOO excited about the magic bit, though, because I thought it was really well done in the series - Callum's discovery of the arcanum. I wonder which one will be next? I think he is pretty close to Moon? Especially after Claudia's betrayal and Soren's redemption - I think this would influence Callum's view of 'appearances' and illusion. Or Ocean. He seems more aligned with the 'cooler' elements. I think he'd love learning Earth, and I don't know much about Stars, but Sun feels a bit at odds with his essence.

And whoops, I couldn't contain the enthuse.

2 Questions and 2 Suggestions:
1Q The bird, which I am assuming contains the soul of the king, which I assume Ez would understand - where is it?
2Q (possibly nothing to do with you; my memory is terrible) What happened with the souls Virren had captured and may they please be brought back?
1S 'red as a beet' possible typo
2S 'fuss' in this context, not 'fuzz'

You have tackled one of the greatest challenges in this type of cartoon - what happens to the romance no longer fueled by adventure, adrenaline and necessity? You seem to be doing a marvellous job so far!

I am honestly so impressed with this! My first Dragon Prince fic, and it's so good!

Okay, then. Intrigued, definitely.

Your writing style is so... comfy? It just flows - it's really relaxing and easy to read. It really suits the story. :)

Is it weird that I, frankly, kind of don't even care about the story?! I'm just here to meet more fans! I just finished, after looking for a version online for so long. And fudge, I loved it! So, hello, like-minded person.

Really nice fic, the best that I have ever read actually. You really nailed the story and the characters. I hpoe the real season 4 is as good as your take. I'm really looking forward to March now!