Reviews for The Alpha |
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kotomi101 chapter 3 . 1/14 A few more typos, that would be easy to fix. Otherwise good writing. |
Terri411 chapter 5 . 12/10/2019 Awesome that they finally got themselves together, I very dislike that Dr. Wales, I wish Regina would had kicked his ass for what he was tried to do to Emma, hope Regina gets to spend time with her son Henry sometimes soon, loved their date that they had in the fact that they are trying to be together, thank you for sharing... Mabellas chapters, excellent writing, so starting to love your wonderful fanfiction and so looking forward to you're next sweet update, thank you and HAPPY WRITING :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))) xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox.. |
Sammii16 chapter 5 . 12/5/2019 Thank you |
OuatDH chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 MAnswer to comments: There is a reason for Emma not being the typical omega, one you will probably get later. It’s NOT rape, Emma is fighting her own lust, not Regina, and she ends up losing, yes Regina is pushing her, but Emma takes the decision herself, and that’s also why she doesn’t push Regina of. |
ClaireR89 chapter 1 . 12/2/2019 Good but very rushed |
Stuckinmichigan chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 Also I think you’re gonna have to make Emma not be sheriff. How can she be an Omega, not be able to fight off an unwanted Alpha, but be sheriff? She would have a gun and have the right to defend herself. Yet Regina easily walks in and rapes her. But Emma does nothing about it. |
Stuckinmichigan chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 Dude not cool. You really need to put a rape warning. Seriously. Emma repeatedly told Regina no and to leave. And she took what she wanted anyway. |
Sammii16 chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 Kudos Thank you |
Sammii16 chapter 3 . 12/1/2019 You are doing fine with your story. There's only few like this type. Kudos Thank you till next time |
Sammii16 chapter 2 . 11/30/2019 Great start Kudos Thank you |
caligurl18 chapter 2 . 11/30/2019 good story so far. post more longer chapters. |