Reviews for Murtagh's Red Dance
bloodline 69 chapter 2 . 10/15
Please update the stories soon I am hooked on these stories
Jasmine Faith chapter 2 . 5/24
Please UPDATE! It’s been SIX months already!
Chaosmar18 chapter 2 . 5/4
He would be 49 name day old by the time the House Tyrell took over after House Baratheon in the royal council list that you have.
Io's Torment chapter 2 . 3/20
Awesome start!
Project Pseudonym chapter 2 . 2/22
I just found this story and I really loved it!

The way you made Viserys I more competent was very inspiring and the resulting political system he set up really make me think how others didn't think of such solution. I really hope you continue this story.
Slaggedfire chapter 2 . 1/14
Viserys is giving too much power to his vassals.
agcfootball85 chapter 2 . 1/4
This is fantastic. I’m looking forward to seeing more!
Liantei chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Wow! A royal council? That's actually a really great idea and it probably would have negated the majority of Westeros's problems if something like it had been implemented
AquilaPallas129 chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Brilliant, love your stories!
TheOnlyKing chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Amazing
William Longespee chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Oh my god this was good.

In canon Westeros, the Seven Kingdoms would constantly be at each other's throat because each Kingdom had its own interests. With the nobility constantly being head to head with each other, Royal Power was undermined and this weakened the Targaryens. The Targaryens had to wage wars like the one against the Peakes' to keep the high nobility in line.

But now in your story, the Great Lords and Houses can look to King to advance their interests and unknowingly increase Royal Power in the process. Hand of the King Lord Paramounts will be acting in the name of the crown when they make edicts. Even if they act in their own interests while being Hands, they are strengthening the Position of Hand of the King and therefore strengthening the Power of the Royal Family. If this law remains intact then the Taragryens will essentially become Absolute Monarchs even if they lose their dragons since they no longer have to face strict opposition from the Great Houses of the Realm.

This new Hand of the King system has actually changed The Game of Thrones. There is now a measure of certainty in Westorosi Politics, they know who the next Hand of the King will be. There is nothing else in this Feudal Society that is assured. Lords may marry their daughter to the King's second son in order to MAYBE have a chance at the line of succession. But this new Royal Council system along with absolute succession laws will bring a measure of stability that is normally unattributed to Feudal States. All in all, this is so much better then that absolute piece of shit ending to season 8.

This was awesome.

Minor nitpick: Maesters lose their surnames when they join the citadel. While you could have wrote that Archmaester Willem was formerly of House Tully, he shouldn't still be using his surname.
marlastiano chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
I cant wait to see more :)
10868letsgo chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Awesome! I love it.
forevertaekook chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
I love it, this was a really good chapter can't wait for the next one
GrayAngel13 chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Love it. Can't wait for more.
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