| Reviews for You had your chance |
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   javi30 chapter 16 . 9h Very good chapter. Keep writing. Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones. |
| tsun chapter 16 . 8/6 keep safe and stay healthy. |
| tsun chapter 11 . 8/6 cute story but not enough fight and sasuke had only been fighting weaker foes. not the same level as him. still, nice story. |
| dustinpuffer chapter 16 . 7/31 Holy shit, take care, this shitty pandemic just scary in how fast it spread, Thank you for the update anyway, It was really OOC but I love it :D |
| Shvydis chapter 16 . 7/31 Glad to hear all's good g, good looks |
| Edgar115 chapter 16 . 7/31 That must suck hope you get better |
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/31 Lmaooo |
| Cerue Leanne Dawn chapter 16 . 7/30 Get well soon... (:-))..3 |
| Thatz mann chapter 1 . 7/30 Ah, and you lost me and the other comments/reviews that are praising this mind boggling I mean what the fuck is "Dound" |
| M2R chapter 16 . 7/30 nicee... |
| Tony McNucklz chapter 10 . 7/26 They wouldn't be missing nins for taking the kiba. mist would just put out a bounty and send their hunter nin after the kiba. missing ninja are shinobi that are declared traitor by their home village. mist putting a bounty on them is the same as stone putting a bounty on the 4th hokage. or bounties put out on senju deaths to whiddle down a powerful clan during war. mist putting a bounty on him only means that they will pay if anyone succeeds. lightning isn't necessarily suddenly mobilizing to march an army to bring him down. the more likely threat is that while traveling anyone with a bingo book might try to collect. or report his location to actual hunters for a finders fee. |
| N chapter 15 . 7/21 Please update! I love this story |
| gogo bananas chapter 15 . 7/14 very interesting concept |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/12 Is this SI stupid? Hevonstantly overlooks things, barely knows what he can do, and he didn't instantly knovk Tayuya out when she says Jiraiya is her boss. Jiraiya made Kisame and Itachi step off, no idea why Sasuke didn't immediately try to neutralize Tayuya or take her hostage or genjutsu her, SOMETHING to prove he isn't just an incompetent moron. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12 You can just destroy Otogakure since I'm pretty sure it's implied that besides the Dound Five everyone in the village is pretty fodder. Then uou can just go to Konohagakure and say "You're welcome guys I took care of a hostile village and a very wanted S-ranked traitor!" You would probably be welcomed as a hero by most. Although the Konoha 12 and the other two Sannin would probably be suspicious, this would at least look like a very competent undercover mission seen through by a good Konoha shinobi by the rest of the world. Collect the hawk team and you might even bring MORE useful shinobi for Konoha, making this 'totally sancioned operation' a HUGE net gain. |
