Reviews for Smile for the Camera
nemosmith chapter 1 . 5/8
when you realize you have the same friends lol
WolfessLizi chapter 10 . 4/9
That was exactly what I was hoping for when I clicked on this fic. Absolutely splendid, and definitely going on my re-read list!
jaylamode chapter 10 . 4/8
Damn this was absolutely exquisite! I binged the whole story today and omg I loved it ! I hope you continue this story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19
to awnser you summary questions 1 and 2 in the order 1: yes.
2: absolutely not
Erzatscarlett chapter 9 . 12/14/2019
Omg such a sweet chapter. Izuku and Eijiro is a ship I’m getting into more and more XD.
Erzatscarlett chapter 8 . 12/13/2019
Loved this chapter. And thanks for the cliffhanger ;(
Treecko360 chapter 8 . 12/13/2019
*sniff* Oooh my heart! That was so sweet!
Hazel Roses chapter 3 . 12/12/2019
Hi loves, I'm back! I hope you're doing well!

So this chapter is odd to me. At the beginning, Bakugou didn't sound like himself to me. He sounded too sweet. Like the "You don't?" and looking sad. I would expect him, to say something more abrasive like "Shut up! You know damn well you tell me everything!" then diving into body language that indicates Midoriya's comment hurt him. If there were no names, I'd have no idea that was supposed to be him. He can be thoughtful while still being brash. It's a hard balance, but I've seen you guys do it. I get that you tried to explain why he would be nice, but for me, it didn't quite fit based off what we've seen in the anime. Not saying he wouldn't ever be nicer. I think he has the potential to not be an asshole all the time, but I saw this as a complete 180. He does a lot of "whining", "grumbling" and "moaning" too.

It was also a hell of a lot of dialogue to where it started to get pretty dry. I in no way, shape, or form am saying this was a badly written chapter; I can just see quite a difference between your first two chapters. Perhaps fleshing it out a bit with more back scene writing next time will help the dialogue flow a bit easier. I understand this seems to be building here, so I don't expect more action, I think more looking into Midoriya's thoughts, even funny commentary about the conversation with Ochako would help.

I did like how you incorporated Endeavor's previous abusive tendencies into the topic about his creator! Kirishima and Midoriya's interactions are so adorable. I absolutely love it! The fact that Midoriya managed to make Kirishima blush with what kind of side work he does says something about his attraction to him. As an avid crossfitter, I found Midoriya passing out because he didn't realize how much he'd done very believable. Sometimes you just want to keep going and think, "I can definitely do one more set" then your body disagrees. Him falling into Kirishima's arms was too cute.

Now I just want to reiterate that anything I've said are just subjective observations and you make do what with them what you wish!
Erzatscarlett chapter 5 . 12/10/2019
Omg this story turned out better than I was expecting. I love Eijiro so much. I can’t wait for the next chapters.
Hazel Roses chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
My darlings, what are you doing to me?! I literally never looked at MidoriyaxKirishima before! I've read some DekuxShouta mixed in some fanfiction and even once OchakoxDekuxTodorokixBakugou (yes it was a foursome) but not this pairing. The way you write them just clicks so well!

It is hard for me to read present tense for some reason but I still greatly enjoy this. Midoriya is an adorable cute mess and Kirishima suave flirty guy, just as would expect. Oh, and you should probably give some thought to that Kacchako teacherxstudent you hinted at if you're bored one day you naughty things.

I wasn't used to hearing Ochako say babe so much. She actually kind of reminded me more of Mina if there hadn't been names to know who was talking. Super minor. Obviously didn't stop me from reading the rest. Bakugou is Bakugou though, ha!

I was so hoping Kirishima would go inside at the end but I knew you guys wouldn't push their relationship that fast. You like to tease, and cliffhanger, and make me say what the fuck. Good job my friends. Only other minor thing when Kirishima was jacking off (still hot by the way!) he didn't use lube or spit. Sounds a little uncomfortable. I also love love LOVED Kirishima's fantasy about Midoriya. You darlings are very proficient at making fantasies, sex scenes, scenes in general, and the character's feelings become visible and decipherable.

I'm done with my last final tomorrow and look forward to reading another chapter soon!
Hazel Roses chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
So I showed up for Kacchako and didn't quite pay attention to which pairing is #1. I found out quickly when I started reading. Ha! I usually do not read yaoi pairings. Nothing against them, it's just not my niche usually. However, I really liked the idea of Kirishima as a cam boy and decided since I was here, I might as well finish the first chapter. He has the perfect personality for it!

The way you described Kirishima was absolutely perfect. He in general, from his mannerisms to his speech, seems perfectly in character. I don't know much about cam boys/girls but I assume they do advertise whatever products they're using especially if they have a sponsor. It sounded realistic to me even though I don't truly know if it is.

The arm sized dildo mention freaked me out a bit. Not going to lie. I kept going anyway though because I'm curious and nosy. It's a blessing and a curse sometimes. I loved Kirishima's shout out to Deku. I think that would drive anyone mad with how Kirishima said it. Great job there! Also is Kirishima bisexual or pansexual? The comment about him eating pussy made me wonder. I could see him being pansexual for sure.

I was thinking when Kirishima starts jacking off with the lube that it was odd for him to sound like a commercial in the midst of it. I don't think it detracted from the story; it was just something that caught my attention. Another thing is you're switching between past and present. It should be one or the other. It seems your goal was to stay in present tense for the most part but at the beginning in the there was some switching between the two.

I like that you went into what happens after the camera stops! Wow, this story has really caught me by surprise. Even though it's out of my usual zone, I have a feeling I may finish it anyway. Bakugou and Kirishima's initial interaction is so fucking perfect I want to cry. When he called Bakugou a goblin, I fucking died! As much as I love him, he very much is a goblin.

Bitch you did not! (I am not calling you a bitch. It's a statement word like "holy shit" for me). They're meeting in person?! Kirishima knows it's him! I wonder why Midoriya is acting like he doesn't know who Kirishima is. Interesting.

OVer all wonderful job and I'm glad I gave this story a chance! I'll have to finish reading it after my finals because I have been using my study time to write this review.
Fangirl031415 chapter 3 . 12/6/2019
I LOVE where this story is going. Please keep up the good work.
Kairi Asakura chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Okay, I am grinning like a crazy old lady and I need to see MORE of this! Imma wait for the next one! XD