I love It. I miss this ship so much, I'm so glad to see works about It as good as this one!

This is so good, I love this pairing and this story!

So a few things about this:

Good gosh, it looks like Billy finally grew a few brain cells as he got older. He still acts childlike, though, which fits him.

I like the addition of Sir Raven - a good little inlore gag. Grim, Billy, and Mandy were all kept in character, as well.

Your grammar and structure have come a long way. I'm proud of you.

Finally, some good Billy x Mandy stories

Huh, nice story. Keeping them in character, even as high school lovers. Like Grim said, they’re a match made in hades.