Please post soon. I haven't commented on a story in years but this one is exceptional.

Glad you posted the three some hope you do a separate add on of the whole thing.

Super great lemon. Bella is so selfish only thinking of herself but Peter is so much more mature and thinks only if her. So Chat isn't the villain hmmm

I don't know who is more of a monster Peter or Victoria? Both are into torture. I know Peter is revenge driven but he is really bad.

You did very good with Peter's pov. You write very well and make reading enjoyable.

I really like it. I love Peter too. Keep it up I am here reading.

I love Peter and Bella stories! I really love this story and I cannot wait to read more

I like how comfortable with herself Bella is with Peter already. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it. I am so impressed with your creativity. Imagination and commitment. I love this story. I do not know now whether I will be able to wait for the next meeting with your story and not die of curiosity what will happen to us and what will surprise us in the upcoming chapters.

glad you're safe and back to writing this story .

thanks for the Capital!

I cannot wait to find out what's happening with Edward/charlotte/Tanya's manaj a trois x

dang that was erotic

Ha! So there, idiot Edward! Now Bella and Peter are on the right track. And now for some fun times! Thanks for the update.

Well, Edward always was a cockblocker even if it was his own. But at least Bella and Peter and on the right track if they can get rid of DumbWard. Thanks for the update!