Reviews for Achievement Hunter
kitsuneswiftpaw chapter 2 . 7/23
I noticed it’s been a while since you updated, and I wanna say that I like this take on the gamer Naruto story and would love to see more of it.
Shadetail28 chapter 2 . 5/25
Just noticed this particular story, and this is a really interesting take on a Gamer crossover. I've seen several where the main character had to unlock things about the system, but I think this is the first I've read where it's a purely achievement based system; Which is pretty awesome.

Better still, the dice apparently decided on a particularly unusual team setup for Naruto's team so I'll be curious to see if they work together as well as I think they would. I mean, Naruto is damn near perfect for running interference so Ino can use her Mind Transfer technique pretty effectively, and probably with less risk than normal if he keeps a clone or two out of combat to kawarimi with her just in case she misses (I seem to remember canon mentioning that the spirit returning to the body slowly after missing was a big weakness for the Mind Transfer). Give him some relatively loose clothing and Shino could probably hide his Kikaichu among the clones' clothing to give anyone who disperses one a nasty chakra draining surprise. The only trick would be keeping the kikaichu from popping the clones themselves, but I'd assume that would come with practice.

Either way, fun stuff, and I hope this one makes it back into the rotation for updates at some point.
Dragonkeeper10 chapter 2 . 2/10
Team Combination sounds interesting. Espically considering the abilities of Ino and Shino are so unused and not explored well in the series. Seriously one can summon and control bugs and the other can infiltrate your mind. Explore that more alongside Naruto with his gamer abilities and a Sensei who specializes in illusions and you got a deadly kill-team ready to go.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/3
Hum... it would be interesting to see him repeatedly come back to this scene with a different team each time. Maybe due to the Wave mission or the Hiruzen dying at the chunin exams? He could get to know all of his classmates, or at least the main ones since the ones without shinobi didn't pass their Jonin's test apparently.
TorioWint chapter 2 . 1/29
Marvelous Chapter!
I loved the whole unlocked through achievement system!
It makes things very interesting!
Your writing is also superb af!
I loved everything I have read so far!
Thanks a lot for it!
Draegoon chapter 2 . 1/27
really interesting take on the "in-a-game-naruto" (subset of the "video-game-life" fanfic typing" fanfic type not to be confused with the "gamer-naruto" fanfic. i like the fact that you need acheievments to get the video game based things that come with these and really hope that he gets access to dungeons soon because i love reading about how people do the dungeon macanic in these fics. great fic and i'll be seeing you next time!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24
Please update soon
rbear1231 chapter 2 . 1/2
ok...hinata not on team...sad.

intresting so far.
Wheresmydoseofinsanity chapter 2 . 1/1
Off to an interesting start. Hope to see more.
Adypoker chapter 2 . 12/31/2019
Isn't this super dumb?!
Shuriken and any type of mastery of anything is mental, the only thing that shouldn't change through clones and saves is physical changes, a mastery isn't a physical change but a mental one...
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 2 . 12/31/2019
Well now, this is definitely going to be an interesting ride. And I think with having both Chouji and Shikamaru with her, Hinata will be able to gain that much needed boost of confidence...and maybe the Bashing Squad won't be as bad (I only call them that because a lot of people like to bash Kakashi, Sakura, Sasuke and Kiba in my experience moreso than other characters)

Definitely curious as to what these changes will do...
OmniUnorthodox chapter 2 . 12/31/2019
Usually people would simply switch Naruto and Kiba along when making "new" teams, but I like that you actually switched up all three teams. On a side note I laughed when Kurenai said she wanted to surpass Itachi because of what happened in the anime. But you definitely have a fan in me.
OmniUnorthodox chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
Really enjoyed the first chapter, a bit of a twist to the gamer schtick is always welcome.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2019
I'm glad to see a new story from you, great writing and I hope to see more updates soon!
OrigamiGuyII chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
Definitely followed, this was an epic start to your story. So is this an AU since Itachi appears to still be part of the village? Or was Kurenai simply acknowledging Itachi's skill prior to his 'defection'?

Either way, can't wait for the next chapter! 3
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