...Uuuuuuuuuummmmmm...As much as I hate to say this, but you might have to check each chapters for any repeats. This is the second time that I've come across a repeated chapter in your story. Sorry! :(

First of all, even if I've yet to read the rest, LOVE THE STORY SO FAR! Second, I hate to bring this up, buuuuuuuuut Chapter 4 seems to be a repeat of Chapter 3. Soooooo, you MIGHT need to come back to this chapter and put up the right chapter. Again, sorry for bringing this up! ~;

And I thought I was the Only One Re-Watching Treasure Planet Recently

Okay I’ve just started this and so far I think it’s okay and kinda like it. I’m sorry to be that reviewer but: do you know that chapters 3 and 4 say the same thing? I’m going to keep reading but I’m kinda worried part of the story might be missing.