Reviews for Legend of Finn the Hero
Guest chapter 5 . 7/22
Good chapter, so Finn and Naofumi were learning more about the mechanics and aspects of this World, i hope that this alliance can generates more mutual benefits in the future, especially with the adventurer experiences of Finn.

Also, was sad see as the party members of Finn leaves him out of fear to gets the anger of the king and the church, though that i liked as his former party members showed their regret for has to leaves their hero and companion for the incident of the rigged trial, and Finn showed his lack of anger for this, undestanding their situation instead, making that the party of the sword hero, leaves their hero in good terms, unlike with the case of the parties of the spear hero and bow hero, that after leaves their heroes by the incident with the spirity turtle, they even betrayed and used their former heroes like scapegoats, as the cowards and pieces of shit that they are, especially Bitch and Mald.

But i wonder whom would be the party member of Finn after this. I thinks in some candidates; 1. Rifana, the friend of Raphtalia, as perhaps in this story, she is still alive and Finn would rescue her. 2. Rino, one of the former party members of Motoyasu, whom was sold like a sex slave by Bitch and Finn would rescue her from this grim fate. 3. Rishia, the young magician and daughter of a nobleman, that was kidnapped by the corrupt governor of the northen territory, and maybe Finn would be whom rescue her than Itsuki. 4. Eclair, the daughter of Lord Saetto, the deceased lord of the village of Raphtalia, that was unfairly arrested for the bigots after the enslaving of the survivors of this village, and maybe Finn rescue her. 5. Sadeena, the protector of Raphtalia, perhaps Finn would meets her during his adventures and she finds that Finn is an ally of Naofumi and Raphtalia, making that she would become his party member to helps him and Raphtalia against the waves.

And to finishes, considering that Finn replaced Ren in this story as the sword hero, i wonder if Finn would deals with the dragon like Ren did it in the original story, though that Finn wouldn't commits the mistake of Ren of leaves rotting the corpse of the dragon and would burn it or even harvest its dead body to gives a lot meat to the villagers and even the bones of the dragon to gets a lot money and incomes to sell this to the guilds.

Keep the good job.
allen Vth chapter 5 . 7/22
Finn and Naofumi will become good friends. And while it's bad that Finn is pretty much partyless, it's good that people who won't fully support him are gone. Would've been worse if they decided to quit later down the line.
Eddyg125 chapter 5 . 7/19
So happy to see a new chapter up
gaming-is-served chapter 4 . 7/18
NEW CHAPTER YAY
Max Moreno chapter 5 . 7/18
This is getting good, please update as soon as you can, but I am a bit curious on what ability's and magic powers does he have considering his track record.

And can there be an omake where Finn starts dating the queen.
shaggyzoinks chapter 5 . 7/18
This was a pretty funny interaction with Finn and welt hope to see more
Axcart chapter 5 . 7/18
I hope he stumbles his way into a doungen of a ancient evil and kicks it's ass and steals it's treasure
RenegadeForLife chapter 5 . 7/18
Thanks for the chapter
Jebest4781 chapter 5 . 7/18
it'll be interesting to see how Finn will work through the dungeons and quests while rarely interacting with Naofumi personally rather than over the Communication line. can't wait for more
Sceonn chapter 5 . 7/18
For once I want a Shield Hero story where the Hero actually leaves the country.
TheOrangeLord chapter 5 . 7/18
I like this book a lot :)
L chapter 4 . 6/6
Good chapter, i liked the outcome of this trial, as Finn could proves Naofumi that he believes in his innocence, and to the same time, he avoid be punished like Naofumi for refuses to condemns him, by the battle that occurs for the bitch provoking Motoyasu to attacks Finn with the excuse that he threated the bitch, and Itsuki and Naofumi also joined to this brawl, i would likes imagines this like a battle of Super Smash bros, to have four fighters in this battle.

Also, was cool see how Finn and Naofumi could unlocked the communication sword and shield to absorbs the radio gem of the bumblegum princess, now with this, they could be in contact and helps themselves.

But i wonder if the bitch would also frame Finn out of spite for not fell in her lies. Though that considering that the bitch is collaborating with the church itself, perhaps she abstains from frames Finn like Naofumi, because if the saint sword hero ends accused from a similar crime than the "shield demon", this could brings problems to the religion of the church, to put in doubt one of their saint heroes. Though that maybe the fact that Finn sided with Naofumi, caused that the bitch would targets him too in some possibles traps, or even provokes Motoyasu again to fights him.

To finishes, i wonder if the party of Finn would be still loyal to him? I asks because i thinks that among of the parties of Ren, Itsuki and Motoyasu, the sword hero is whom have better companion than the bow and spear hero parties, because Itsuki has to Mald, the racist knight, that treats everyone like lesser beings, and Motoyasu has to bitch, the poor excuse of princess that abuses of her power to do anything with total impunity. But Ren's party don't have any nasty or evil person, and even among their parties, the team of the sword hero was the only one that fights alongside with their hero against the spirit turtle during this arc, even if this ends causing their tragic demise, while the parties of Itsuki and Motoyasu, abandoned their heroes and even backstabbed them, showing that their so called parties, only were friends for interest, than true allies, unlike the party of Ren that was loyal to the very end. Then, i would likes to see that the party of Finn, could still supporting him, like they did it for Ren against the spirit turtle, but this time with Finn, they could still alives to much advanced points of the original story in comparision.

Keep the good job :)
neo567 chapter 4 . 6/4
Realized the previous comment was abit aggresive. So, to clarify, you seem to have a bad habit while typing "does" by hitting the s and e keys in the wrong order making have several "dose" in your writing.
neo567 chapter 3 . 6/4
I wouldnt normally do this but because the story is fun and it keeps happening. Its spelled does, not dose I saw at least 4 instances.
Nightfrightpony chapter 4 . 5/17
more please
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