Brilliant I hope to see more soon!

Awesome new chapter

I love so much this story. And I love thea ... When we Will sera Theodore again?Will he go to Potter manor?

Good Chapter. I hope I'm mistaken but if I understood correctly Tea will never publicly reveal the truth about the Potter family( being the Le Feys) as I said I hope I'm wrong because I would love reading the reaction of the wizarding world.

Bye and see you later

I didn't notice any errors this time, dc, and even if there were any I doubt they were major enough to really tick off the grammar purists. :)
Eh? How would I know? Well~ *rubs the back of his head* I.. I am one?

*ahem* We are also going through some heat here on the Mid Atlantic coast, my friend, and I had the added dismay of having my den's ac go kaput on me around 6 PM EDT. *sighs* The good thing about that is that I still have a working Ac in my bedroom. :)

Small or not, dc, your chapters are a joy to read and review. Please continue when you may. :)

I really like your story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

The reference to "Ivy League School" seemed really disjointed to me as I've always recognised it as an Americanism. Also the implication that "a place" would be held for her.

Loved the chapter otherwise and can't wait for more 3

Hermione's cat is named Crookshanks, not croak. Love the story, and the originality of the idea

Apology accepted, DC. Please continue when you may.

I’m so glad that you updated again and I can’t wait until the next one. My only question is where’s Attor?

Great chapter, but maybe next time before just changing all “Tea”s in the story to “Téa”s, check that it didn’t change some other words - Téarfully, for one! I get that it’s the easy route but be careful with it :)

I love your works.. The kiss of Death is one of my favourites.
there are a few spelling mistakes in this chapter and most of your 'T's are capital. just thought you should know.
Grangers are such a small part of the original story that to me it doesn't make any difference.
keep up the excellent work. Thanks for updating so fast

loved it. in all honesty this version of the grangers reactions feels more real. in fear things usually play out this way. would they maybe eventually accept this and her in this scary dangerous wold maybe but hearing just how bad it is and seeing what has happened because of it makes their reactions real as they only just learned what was really going on. the question is will they eventually learn from this. maybe her guardianship is permanent but it doesn't mean she can't eventually develop a relationship with them later. anyways sorry for the rant. loved it and hope to read more soon.

I really like your story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

It is sad about Hermione's parents but I am glad that Croackshanks was saved. That is my favorite part of the story as I love the animal characters. I look forward to the next chapter.