Reviews for The Quirky Devil: Rewritten
Imperious115 chapter 12 . 7/31
Like the rewrite keep it up my dude.
MosuraYa chapter 12 . 7/27
I’m not done with this I swear I’ve just been focusing on other things but I’ve been writing a little still
Guest chapter 12 . 6/19
koo
SonicMax chapter 12 . 5/24
This feels like a recap of a story is it? It feels like it's moving very quickly and I don't know much about dxd or the original story of this fic.
Acnologia01 chapter 2 . 5/18
It's cute that she called him cinnamon roll lol
Gamelover41592 chapter 12 . 5/16
well Izuku is still screwed XD but at least this shows his quirk is working ;)
ProjectIceman chapter 4 . 5/8
Hmm...if dragons exist here, would that mean that Ryukyu's transformation is not a Quirk, but that shes a dragon?
ProjectIceman chapter 3 . 5/8
Wait. Asia is already in Kuoh, but Raynare is alive?
Guest chapter 7 . 4/23
Why torment poor izuku by putting THAT PIECE OF SHIT IN RAISER PEERAGE WHYY !
Sandman001 chapter 5 . 4/12
There are just too many inconsistencies with this story. Some minor, some major. It all adds up. 1) what was Akeno doing in Mustafa to begin with. 2) Japanese schools don't begin in the fall. 3) The white dragon emperor sacred gear is a pair of wings, not a gauntlet. 4) There is no way that Rias can have both Dragon Emperors, especially when Issei took 8 pawns. 5) You just throw random MHA characters in a story that so far has nothing to do with them. You introduce Midnight, but mention she was a recurring client even though this is the first time we've seen her. And you want her to switch schools even though she works at UA and is a Hero teacher. 6.) We now nothing of what has happened at UA. In DxD, the gremory peerage is down with Riser in a little over a month, that's basically past the sports festival and maybe half way through the Stain Arc. 7) Since you had Asia already revived, you just completely throughout the rescue arc. The whole order of events is out of wack.
Gamelover41592 chapter 11 . 4/11
excellent work on this chapter and very adorable :)
Robert Walker1 chapter 11 . 4/5
All in good time my friend, maybe you can make Issie secretly a Chaos Brigade member, and have Koneko, and Rias, like Izuku.
Wolf1741 chapter 10 . 3/29
This story doesn’t make sense at all
AwesomeMan327 chapter 2 . 3/18
This story was made to fix the mistakes of the previous but I still see plenty of them. The interactions between Akeno and Izuku just feel rushed as well as the fact that we never really got an answer as to why Akeno was in Musutafu in the last chapter anyway. Then there’s the factual errors with the school. Japanese schools aren’t like american schools, new school years don’t begin after summer and there wouldn’t be a class with different years in it. MAYBE elective type classes, I don’t know, but First Years and Second Years would definitely NOT be in the same home room.
bauers374 chapter 1 . 3/8
So will there be Issei/Rias as well
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