This story alway has me on the edge of my seat. I thought this chapter was well done, finally getting Natsu to find out. It kills me having to wait for the next update.

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Ahhh so good! Man I'm super surprised that it took me this long to find this awesome fic. What I really enjoy is the pacing of Lucy's training. I've read the other "Characters leaves and comes back stronger" tropes and this one with Lucy has got to be my favorite. Hopefully we see another update soon because I'm already craving for another chapter.

I love the way you’re writing the story. I’m looking forward to the next update

Oh wow! Finally Natsu!

woah! what happens next?!

I’m glad that Natsu and Levy finally know about Lucy. And I’m glad that when Wendy found out she immediately confronted Natsu about it unlike everyone else. This Gajeel and Natsu fight about to be epic and heartbreaking at the same time because I am a freaking sap and cry about everything lol.

Es una cosa tremenda ... Estaba esperando este momento con ansias ya quiero saber lo que sigue está genial sigue así porfa

Nice job! Excited for the next chapter!
Whose key does Levy have?

No need to second guess yourself- you did great! I love this chapter.
I really like the explanation for Levy not saying anything. That was such a bittersweet revelation!

I'm with Wendy when it comes to Natsu. Fuck him. He's a dick. (Poor Wendy and Carla!) Props to the author for making me feel bad for him while I'm still mad at him!

I love that Lucy is still training and getting stronger! I hope she doesn't forgive Natsu easily. She's been working so hard and I don't know how he could prove himself to her, but she deserves more. They've been ignoring and replacing her for over four months!

The only criticism I can think of is that you used the wrong your/you're at one point, but it seemed like a small mistake. Keep up the good work! I can;t wait for the next update!

I kind of hope she doesn't go directly back to FT. It would be cool if they had to find her because they would finally be putting in some work rather than continuing on with the one-sided friendships where Lucy does all the emotional work. Even if you don't go that route, I trust that you will continue to make a great story! Have confidence in your writing- it is excellent!

it was beautiful done in my opinion

I enjoyed seeing how Lucy is trying to avoid the return to Earthland

The Gajeel and Levy bits were brilliant and Wendy vs Natsu was quite dazzling

Natsu's reaction to finding out was so wonderfully written you could almost see it

I look forward to seeing if Makarov will be shedding any tears by the time Natsu and Gajeel are finished at the guild.

Excellent update as always Really caught the feels, now you can continue on from that other story you based this one on and make it truely your own,nastu sure has alott more to feel as his house is filled with memorabilia of their missions and times together

I honestly enjoyed this chapter. I loved Wendy’s reaction to finding out Lucy was no longer a member of FT and she was was so quick to realize that Natsu had hurt Lucy and laid the best down on him for her. That was awesome.

Natsu’s reaction to finding out Lucy had been gone was priceless. He’s also being selfish by trying to blame his guild mates for his own neglect and treatment of his friendship with Lucy. I hope Gajeel and the master beat some sense into him so he can take ownership of what his actions or lack there of caused.

Levy’s POV was interesting, she felt guilty but never once went to Lucy’s house to look for her. At least he reassured her that Lucy doesn’t hate her. The part where Gajeel was looking into her deep chocolate eyes is so Natsu’s description for Lucy and that annoyed me.I don’t think Lucy is emotional ready to head back to the guild. Lucy needs to learn to love herself, where her happiness is not dependant on others but rather it is enhanced. I feel like it’s sexist that Lucy gets to pine over Natsu and not even have a love interest like he did at least even to have a different perspective on what she wants.I really hope Loke and the rest of her spirits at least help her find a place where she can train physically and heal emotionally before meeting her guild mates again.

Thanks for sharing and looking forward to the next update!

Omg! This was an amazing chapter! You wrote this chapter to the status that blew the roof off! The way you Wendy went off on Natsu was perfect! She made him open his eyes! About freaking time! I loved how Mira told him and the reaction he had was spot on what i expected from him! I loved how you spun it to the fact he realized that everyone knew and didn’t tell him! That’s what I call crap hitting the fan! It’s about freaking time he woke up! Also I loved how you wrote about levy finding out! It touched my heart and a tear fell down my face for her! I wanted to mad at Natsu but was upset for him for how he was feeling for Lucy! That part broke my heart that he just didn’t realize she was gone! Tears coming down! Can’t wait to see what is going to happen next and what will Natsu do and how Will Gajeel deal with him and how will Loke get Lucy to go back to Earthland? So many questions! Thanks for updating!

I saw nothing wrong with this chapter. It was well written and Wendy being a badass is really nice. The emotions were well set up and it was over all an enjoyable read. I can’t wait for the next chapter