Reviews for Deku: The Kaleido Hero
Guest chapter 3 . 6/18
Amazing job, can’t wait for the next chapter :D
xbox432 chapter 3 . 6/11
Jekyll and Hyde hmm? I don't think Izuku will be using this one very often... I mean, he may use the Presence Concealment for spying/scouting, but I don't think he'll ever want to use the NP.

Also, I find myself wondering about how he'll do at UA? Like, will he pass Emerald off as a newly discovered Quirk which has a mind of its own like Dark Shadow? And speaking of Tokoyami, I wonder if the two boys will commiserate with one another about how annoying and embarrassing it can sometimes be to be bonded to another personality? I could see the two of them getting along better in your story and perhaps having more conversations about how they manage their partners.

Lastly, I had a bit of a daydream regarding when Izuku needs to give his "Hero Name" in Midnight's class... He can pump himself up saying things like "It's for Emerald, do it for him!" Before declaring himself Kaleid Liner Prisma Emerald: The Magical Boy Hero! And do so while posing. :D
xbox432 chapter 2 . 6/11
Yay! I was given a different shift, so I can keep reading!

I'm not sure why Izuku wouldn't be stoked about the Archer NP... Yeah, there are a lot of poison aspects, but it can also be used for: "generate roots around a target" and even the bit about producing poisonous gas could be used to make something like tear gas or knockout gas. All could be great crowd control abilities.

Naboo Library - I just have to say that I love the fact that you kept up the Star Wars references! :P

I'm loving the synergy between Izuku and Emerald. Not only is Emerald acting as a bit of a teacher, he's also showing himself to be the first friend Izuku has had in years. And the whole thing is just sweet. :D

As for Servants I am guessing on... Well, you already busted my hopes for the Archer, but I'll post them anyways. I went with a Servant roster composed of Heroic Spirits whose defining trait is something Emerald gave Izuku, cute animal ears!

Saber: Suzuka Gozen
Archer: Atalanta
Lancer: Jaguar Man
Rider: Ushiwakamaru
Caster: Nitocris (Though Queen of Sheba is pretty fluffy too...)
Assassin: Shuten Doji
Berserker: Tamamo Cat (LoL, and considering the description of this latest Servant I have high hopes for my guess!)
xbox432 chapter 1 . 6/11
Woo, now that was interesting! Heh, this is only one of two "Magical Boy" fics I've found that not only didn't make me want to cringe, but actually had me smiling. I'll be looking forward to seeing which Servants you have Izuku snag. As for guesses? I'll hold off on that due to almost being late for work... Man, I really should stop procrastinating on getting ready.
Masterx01 chapter 3 . 5/22
'Emerald chuckled before moving up. "In any case, Izuku, you should be ready for tomorrow."

"Yeah," Izuku sighed and laid back down on his bed. "The UA entrance exams…"'

What do you mean by 'tomorrow'?

There is a 10 months gap between the incident with the Sludge Villain and the entrance exam and you just skipped a month training Izuku. What happened to the other 9?
mellra chapter 3 . 5/20
Huh, wasn't expecting Jekyll and Hyde, probably because what I've seen in FGO so far he's taken on a largely human appearance. Is Izuku going to summon the Servants proper, or is he just going to use the Include function with Emerald? Finally, I'm not sure if you already have the Servants all picked out, but one I would really like to see is Saber Astolfo. One look at his outfit should tell you why. Can't wait to see more!
superpierce chapter 3 . 5/20
so I checked out Wattpad and was surprised to see your stories along with other ones you didn't put on this site. Anyway since you've already written the first chapter for the reboot for Fate Reborn why didn't you put it on this site?
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 5/20
Nice chapter
austintristan16 chapter 1 . 5/20
Wait, all Class card on this story' ia male Servant?
Wizardwolf 1020 chapter 3 . 5/19
I hope Deku will start getting some powerful servant cards soon because so far the ones he got are kind of low level with their states and parameters ranging from a few D’s to B’s and the servants themselves aren’t that impressive in comparison to some of the other servants in the Fate franchise. But I guess this is what you want as you want Deku to start out with weaker servants and then give him the really powerful ones later on like Mordred, Achilles, Karna, Charlemagne, Edmond Dantes, or Lancer Arturia who possesses Rhongomyniad. Honestly I really hope Deku gets Charlemagne so he can have all the cool abilities and powers that Charlemagne has.
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 5/19
Nice
doubledamn chapter 3 . 5/19
Hmmm... A thought occurs, if Magecraft has died out with the emergence of Quirks, would Izuku's Magecraft be ridiculously overpowered compared to Magecraft seen in the Nasuverse since Izuku is the only Magus in this world, everything he does would be considered a Unique Mystery and wouldn't suffer from the degradation of the Understood Mystery?
Rinto chapter 3 . 5/19
Ooh, Jekyll and Hyde? Did not expect Mr. Underpowered-in-FGO to be here. Curious to see what's coming next.
mellra chapter 2 . 4/10
So based off the Servants I know of, the one Izuku is currently facing could be either Hessian Lobo, Beowulf, or Angra Mainyu, though I could be wrong. This is turning out great so far, and I can't wait to see where you take it. A couple questions though: are the Servants/Cards already selected, and are there going to be more than one Servant per class? Keep it up!
KingAllen chapter 2 . 3/22
If by some chance you give Izuku OFA, will his magical ability also get enhanced ?
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