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Quite well thought out and implemented storylines with fully developed and integrated new characters. I had a little difficulty in the beginning of the first story, but I think that had to do with how you set up the story and the transitions. Once I got used to your writing style I was able to follow easily.

My only criticism is really has to do with editing. A few times the preposition threw me of as to who it was meant to refer to otherwise I think any other mistakes were simply do to haste and things missed in proofreading.

You presented a unique alternate explanation that tilted what we as readers and the characters believed to be true changing our view of events that had taken place. It was a lot of work and I am glad that not only did I find and read it after it was completed, but also that you followed through with the entire plotline through all four stories.

I hope you create another interesting Harry/Hermione story. Congratulations and good job.

Binge read this series in a couple days. Very good story! Started a bit odd, because its VERY AU...but I loved it. I hope to read more of your work!

wonderful story, thanks for posting it

I read this whole series and I loved it from start to finish! Thank you for writing this.

Finally finished it all :))

i just have to point something: is it me or voldemort's death was a bit too easy? well, not his death per se, but you know, draco and harry's infiltration in his fortress and the way they fought 40 death-eaters. i know both of them were remarkable wizards, but, common sense in consideration, the death eaters and voldemort himself were very powerful too.

and, on that note, gotta say i loved that harry did kill him, specially without using the death curse.

also, really enjoyed peter being somewhat innocent. although it almost felt like the war was a bit too easy because there were no major deaths and no major casualties, apart from lavander.

i LOVED the way you framed dumbledore! so good. it felt very nice watching him gettin what he deserved. greater good my ass.

And this epilogue, so cuteee!

I have just a few doubts: i don't know if u explained and i overlooked it, butttt where were lily and james? they neve found out that? and what curse did voldemort used that resembled so much the death one? also, how could cedric have 2 bodies? still didn't understand that, sorry.

Finally, thanks for writing. It was a truly amazing and brilliant story and you have an incredible and wonderful imagination (I still think it would've be even more remarkable if you hadn't adhered to the cannon storyline that much, after all it was AU, but, well, i'm no writer so i know pretty much nothing about it all).

i appreciate very much your effort and i loved reading it all, specially, as i have said in other reviews, the way you pushed for better integration between the muggle and the wizarding world. reading about prejudice and integration also within the magical society was something very touching and fitting to this whole plot.

Thank you for sharing :)

Fabulous! Really wonderful and of course i wanted it to be longer and keep going. Thank you for posting and added to my favorites. Read ya Later ;)

I loooooooooooved this series. It was wonderful. thanks for writing

Excellent series! I just binge-read all 4. Thanks for writing them!

I love this series

I don’t know what to do with my life now that this is over... lol great ending! Really loved the whole series!

This story was amazing! Thank you very much! I would like to see what became of Dumbledore, and Molly apologizing to her children. How the various couples got together, and their jobs would be nice too. Thanks for many hours of happy reading!

Molly wouldn't have gotten so bad if Arthur had done the right thing from the beginning. I know it's hard because I had to step in when my husband's drinking got out of control a few years ago. He was angry at first, but he knew he needed help and never would have asked for it on his own. He's better than ever now, and I hate to think about what could have happened to him and to our family if he hadn't received help. How can someone say they love someone if they aren't willing to help them when they can't do it for themselves? I have stepped down from my soap box. Thanks for writing!

Molly burned down their shop? That bitch! And I'm blaming Arthur too, for not stepping in when he should have.

I'm hoping James will apologize to Severus. And mean it. Looks like Hogwarts is going to be a much better school when it reopens. Thanks for writing!