Pretty good !

I knew that something should have come out of Anthem, the game itself might have been shit but it had some good lore and cool concepts, like how many people wouldn't want to fly around in one of those suits.

Yes, we all agree that wolf girls are the best.

Change my mind.

: Sits behind table whilst sipping from mug.

Is Ruby going nuts with the Swear Jar going to be a running gag? If so that's nice, also why is Ozpin a female? Does this mean Salem is a male?

I actually quiet enjoyed this and will follow this story. Chapters felt a bit on the short end and consequently rushed and the 'fight scenes' were rather boring to read and short lived for my taste. Would've liked a scene of MC vs Winter.
I liked the attempt on making time skips via journal entries. It's more pleasant to read than stuff like 'weeks later' or 'one training/grinding montage of hell later' as it elaborates on what he actually did/what happened.
Keep up the work!

OOOOOooooOOOO. What will happen? I'm interested.

Wait so did he kill those Atlas guys or not? Kinda would be weird if he just knocked them out considering all the kill he has to his name.

First time reading this and I gotta say, I like what I see. Not enough Anthem fics out there in my opinion. I mean, the game was great, just the campaign wasn't long enough. But I must say I look forward to see what else you got in store for us. As for your 'writing' honestly man; don't worry about it. The fic I'm writing is related to RWBY so I can kinda see where you're coming from with this. Dude just do your best and if you LIKE writing continue. Can't wait for next chapter man, Rookie out.

I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this story. Anthem had so much potential it's sad to see how badly handled it was.