Reviews for Fate Merveille
Legionnas chapter 4 . 1/14
Poor hawk moth to loose an Akuma in such a manner is going to be embarrassing for him when he finds out what happened to it. Marinette is going to go bug eyed in disbelief when she sees the trapped Akuma as is every other Parisian that sees it along with Master Fu. Also nice twist with the future ladybug as caster.
VGBlackwing chapter 4 . 1/14
So is like rider (aka future but different timeline Marinette like how Archer was a different timeline of shirou Emiya) trying to kill Marinette or try to change her path so She could die (aka seize to exist) but we all know that not going to happen considering Alaya has a funny way of saying "you think it easy for you to skip your contract due date? Nah I don't think so buddy" and probably punish them a cruel fate like...killing your own kids in the future or breaking you down to matter just to reform you again
Finalcool720 chapter 3 . 1/12
nice job keep up the great work
berrus-sama chapter 3 . 1/12
technically speaking. Miraculous bearers are a type of wizard. mainly the guardian, and now lady bug, as they make potions to enhance the kwamis.

it would be nice if they found a way to use their powers right there, both the supreme power and the holy grail of the fate series. they look the same. (both work with the equivalent exchange) being the only difference that the grail exits the death of the servants. the supreme power gets you something of equal value to something you want (emotional value also counts)

extra. you could do a echimento where marinete asks, in which class a servant based on it would be (since the servants are only copies of the originals and do not contain their esensia (soul)
Finalcool720 chapter 2 . 1/10
nice job and when i read the line adrian is okay I though okay that has to be chole as a guess anyway looking forward to the next chapter.
nofirekiller123 chapter 2 . 1/9
i think you need to check your text my guy
Finalcool720 chapter 1 . 1/8
Nice job looking forward to more