Reviews for My RWBY's Hero DXD
Guest chapter 5 . 4/5
I personally hope to see what comes next.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/4
Did you people get covid-19 and die?
MisfitWatcher chapter 1 . 2/22
There's too much being mashed into one package. instant drop.
Shonisto chapter 7 . 2/3
Love the story, keep the harem for Jaune, and also in my opinion you as the author has final say, if people don't like your decisions about your story, they can stuff off and read something else, but that's logical and I forgot a lot of people don't even know what logic is anymore, and no that was not aimed at you, sorry.
Anyway, you do you, and keep up the good work with the story, and don't listen to the troglodytes.
BigSmokeYeet chapter 1 . 1/31
This should be a good st- -sees issei bashing- -dips-
CyrusDiamon chapter 1 . 1/29
Having gone through the first chapter I have to say I want to give this fic a good go. That being said the first chapter feels like an amalgamated mess. Personally I think your trying to do too much at one time and some of the amalgamations don't seem to fit well like RWBY's post apocalyptic world and the hero society in my hero academia. It seems your trying to write the my hero academia story while simultaneously writing the RWBY story line at the same time. Try to focus on one story at a time otherwise you wind up with a jumble mess.
the romantic Fox chapter 6 . 1/24
Slamming down another three chapters on me? Jesus, I have homework to do- you can’t keep doing this to me.

Ok seriously now, review time:

Plot is getting interesting- while I think it would do you guys good to branch a little more, it’s still pretty good just needs some polishing in the details (expand a bit more, like with Raynare’s background of abuse, etc. the small things that break some of the immersion.)
Hate to do it to ya, but grammar and syntax again. I don’t know if it was just more noticeable now that I’m not half-asleep and distracted by migraines but it feels like grammar has gotten a little worse and hard to follow.
I’d like to ask for you to clarify something’s that I may just have been too stupid to notice, but: what is the timeline for this? Like, they are all adults right? But if Izuku and Ruby where moved ahead 2 years, then why is Bakugo there? Where they advanced placement and moved into higher grade classes before they where transferred to UABBA, and Bakugo is just 2 years older than them now? Ages and timelines seem really loose right now, and I’m not sure if I just missed something important or what. If you’ve got a running timeline, that’s fine- I would just like some clarification on that.

I really like what you’re doing with Jaune and Issei, I was originally worried you where gonna keep them in as filler and/or comedic relief exclusively while not developing them at all; however, you guys have left me pleasantly surprised. I hope you have plans to continue this, especially with Issei- he’s kinda like Mineta, but he has even more potential to be a great hero (dude just needs to stop being such a himbo.)

In conclusion, the plot is holding up nicely- just expand on it and don’t be afraid to get creative, grammar is an ever present pain that needs some soothing to fix, timeline feels loose and that opens some plot holes that could turn people off, and Issei needs to take an ice bath.

P.S. while the poll is showing that Jaune will not be getting his harem, (moment of silence for the badass human-puppy) I still stand by my assertion of poly-Asia. I will die with my honor intact.

P.P.S. Reiko Yanagi (MHA) and/or Setsuna Tokage (MHA) X Izuku or Jaune should definitely be included and anyone that doesn’t think that can catch these hands.
Destiny Blazer chapter 7 . 1/23
My vote's a yes on Jaune having a harem of his own. He's a lovable guy with potential and love coming out the wazoo. Not to mention he and Izuku make a great duo when fighting together.
slyer243 chapter 7 . 1/22
I suggest a smaller one cloudpanda961
Jaacra chapter 6 . 1/22
How about Kuroka, for Izuku?
cloudpanda961 chapter 7 . 1/22
i really like Jaune in this fic so I'm all in with him having a harem. at first i think he should only have one but after the previous chapter i think a harem of 46 girls is enough. not too big or too small but just enough. anymore it would be competition between him and Izuku and that would annoy a lot of readers.
Dracus6 chapter 1 . 1/22
what about Issei harem
I will eat you chapter 6 . 1/21
Can you plz have izuku first girl be ruby plz?
Bruh chapter 6 . 1/21
Great chapters. Can you give a list of deku harem?
Vantage77 chapter 6 . 1/21
From Highschool DxD: Kuroka, older Kunou, Yasaka
From My Hero Academia: Midnight, Ryuko Tatsuma, Rumi Usagiyama
From RWBY: Sienna Khan, Raven Branwen, Coco Adel

Include them in a harem to please :D (Also would have included Kali Belladonna but didn't know if you would consider it since she's married in cannon or if you are ok with having her be a widow or divorce)
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