This was an awesome ending. Ended just how I thought it would. Vex realizing what she was doing and stopping herself and finally releasing all the hurt she had been keeping to herself. I didn't expect that voice to intervene but I'm not surprised. If memory serves correctly he did it once before during her time as an assassin. Also that talk between Antauri and Vex was long overdue and that was done perfectly. Lastly the scene with Vex eating a veggie burger and making jokes about it being "lawnmower sauce" and all that had me rolling. Great story. Glad to see Vex finally come to terms with herself and finally willing to give herself a second chance of love and to live the life she was meant to. Great job on this and looking to your new story coming out.

I love how vex is so donate yet for the sake of change still trying to show that Mercy

Wow this was intense as you said. This man is boned. Hopefully if he ends up being spared again he would learn to stop his criminal ways. All actions have consequences after all. Also I wonder if Antauri would see what Vex is doing and try to stop her. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

This was so incredibly well written I'm in complete awe! I really got into vex character here and wisp confession of what went wrong! And man I wonder what vex will do now but the team and Antauri party had me rolling something about Gibson coming in calm drinking coffee and was like oh the mating was a success? Just had me rolling in laughter and everyone is so on point!

Man this chapter hits home. This talk was needed, but wow the feels, especially what Wisp said at the end. Also I would hate to be that guy right now he is going to die for shooting Vex. Hopefully Antauri can find Vex and seeing him would remind Vex she isn't that cold hearted assassin she used to be. Looking forward to seeing how this story will end.

Talk about sour grapes, she spares his so called friends and the guy himself but he decides to take the coward's way anyways and tries his hand at revenge. *sighs* I hope that Wisp does get a happy ending and that Vex and Antauri will continue to be happy together.

This chapter took an unexpected turn. First the guy had the nerve to attempt to kill Vex even though she had spared the other criminals. Then Vex has to spill the news to Whisp about her being in love with and married to Antauri. I expected Whisp to be surprised by it but now I need to know what Whisp has to ask Vex. Already looking foward to seeing how this story will end.

Finally got to this one. And wow was it worth the wait. First loved the Chinmay scene. That wish came true as Vex finally opened up and allowed Antauri to see her past and feel all she felt. That whole soul connection scene was wow! Poor Vex and poor Antauri for having to feel that punishment as well. And a unique way to get married lol loved Vex's reaction to it when Antauri said they were mated for life. All I think about is Spongebob when Spongebob says "but I'm married." Someone like Nova could be like "So Vex. Did you get done what Sprx wanted you to?
Vex: No, but I'm married

Now that is true love, they didn't/couldn't do physical intimacy but this is much more powerful, he was willing to persevere and finally got what they both wanted. Each other

BLOCKBUSTER CHAPTER literally this one is now my favorite. Ok first of all that chinmay scene was ppoooowweerrfuulll aahhh I was fangirling soooo hard I loooove those two so much! Beautifully written but the soul ceremony girl u pulled it off perfectly. I was wondering but oh my gooosh you got it done it was a truly deep and beautiful read from the reveal of souls to the not so morning after lol and the shut up and cuddle love from Antauri had me just gushing lol. Very well done

That was soo funny about Sparx saying the typical alpha male on female lol then Antauri trying to seduce Vex lol

Another great chapter. Love Antauri's attempts at seducing Vex using Sprx's "card method" especially that rose in the mouth thing lol also didn't see Antauri's soul entering Vex to open her up coming and having Vex see his memories and his true body. That was interesting. I think Vex will finally give up and open herself up.I don't believe she would hide herself for much longer with Antauri's soul within her. Looking foward to see what happens next :)

Oh my gosh where do I begin?! Get ready for a lot of typos since I'm on my phone and swipe texting is heck. But this was so perfectly written in character with a mature rated T come that just works! Like literally I'm laughing from the spring of in combat because lol it came back on chiro some he did that in the pilot episode with jinmay so that was halarious to see lol

Sprx was on point in perfect character and the interaction was spot on humorous but I could picture the voices perfectly. Honestly the setup was so hard to picture as a slapstick failure because Antauri was so on point in character yet replanting with the user of the cards that just blew up in his face with her cluelessness and that was halarious lol

And the way they finally connected was incredibly written like I just witnessed brain sex and if l I'm not creeped out. I'm weird. Lol I'm kidding but seriously the connection is gonna get to a fire drama level. What did she think of Antauri when she saw his true form I wonder? And even now so I'm wondering how the heck you're gonna write him invading get memories and his reaction to what she had done in her timing

Also I noticed a galactic smash reference of basically why he was so heck bent on freeing her formless state that's keeping her alone like a life support that was touching here.

Poor Vex, it's a shame she has suffered so much and just wishes fo a better life. But the thought of Antauri and Vex flirting makes me choke in laughter lol

The descriptive writing blows me away everyone. The detail is on point and my favorite part of really seeing how vex feels despite it not being shown this girl is something else! The tension with Antauri is just palpable! I can't wait for it to burst but the interaction melded so well here with Gibson and sprx lol it was on point! And she caught some baddies like I love her!