Reviews for Alola, Doom Slayer!
LadMad233 chapter 8 . 17h
So far, this has been awesome! I look forward to the rest.
rafaelrizo98 chapter 8 . 7/29
I imagine Doom slayer catching mew
Anon chapter 8 . 7/28
This story remind me A Professor and a Student by LeDiz. If only author understand Pokemon Master mean.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/27
Regarding to Nebby, i wonder what would happens when the group meets Aerther corporation, to considers the ambitions of Lusamine for open a portal to the Ultra space, something that definitely would causes a notable reaction of Doom Slayer against her and Aether, as this could reminds him when Olivia pierce opened a portal to Hell and brought a demon invasion that cost a lot lives to many people.

Also, talking of Olivia, i couldn't helps in note that she and Lusamine have several things in common; like the fact that both women works in a powerful corporation (UAC / Aether), their investigations leads them to discovers another dimension (Hell / Ultra space), bringing as result that their corporations ends creating some projects related with this dimensions (Argent energy and portals to Hell / creation of Type:Null and portals to Ultra space), and also caused that both women ended developing a unhealthy obsession for this dimensions and they got too far to opens a portal to their world of this dimensions, causing an invasion of demons and Ultra beasts.

And as other similarity, in the final parts of their respectives stories, Olivia and Lusamine ended fusing themselves with some demon and Ultra beast, causing that they ends transforming in an abomination (The Spiderdemon / Lusamine fused with Nihigelo), and this brought severe consequences to this women after be defeated; Olivia was blown by the BFG of Doom Slayer and Lusamine ended in coma by a severe poisoning as result of be too exposed to the toxins of Nihigelo.

To considers this similarities, i wonder if Doom Slayer could ends killing Lusamine if this fanfiction takes several similar points of the original story of Alola, or he would developed a more soft side to the protagonists of pokemon and reluctancy would tries to save Lusamine from the Nihigelo than outrights to kills her, especially if they uses the argument that Nihigelo is an ultra beast, a kind of pokemon, and it is not a demon of the Hell.
PaladinSans chapter 8 . 7/25
MOAR PLS
ReizoXZ chapter 8 . 7/24
Cubone evolved, finally!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22
YES I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS
aliveyr1 chapter 7 . 7/22
needs a little bit of polish here and there but very good!
buterflypuss chapter 8 . 7/22
good chap
L chapter 8 . 7/22
Also, regarding to the meeting of Doom Slayer with Tapu Lele, looks like that Doom Slayer learned more about the legendary pokemon, and even VEGA commented that they could helps them to return to home. But unfortunately, when they were reading the marks and writings in the cave, Doom Slayer learned that the islanders considered as threats to Necrozma and Yvetal, this is very bad, because this means that Doom Slayer already knows that this two legendary pokemon are potentially bad news, like the demons, and if Doom Slayer for some specific reasons ends meeting Necrozma or Yvetal, he would be inmediately hostile toward them and would treats them like demons, sparking a possible and gruesome battle between Doom Slayer and the legendary pokemon. I hope that Cynthia and the other legendary pokemon can finds a way to helps Doom Slayer returns to home, before he ends fighting against Necrozma and Yvetal.

Keep the good job :)
L chapter 8 . 7/22
Great chapter, so officially the journey of Doom Slayer, Ash and his friends to complete the Trials of the islands started, well it is nice see a soft side to Doom Slayer, like be getting along with the pokemon and the young trainers, than still be Ripping and Tearing demons of the Hell.

Also, regarding to the concerns of the professor Kukui and his wife about the possibles dangers that Doom Slayer could be toward the trainers, even to the point of asks him that avoid points his guns toward anyone and "just the ones who deserve it", perhaps this could means that maybe Doom Slayer could tries to learns to be less prone to takes out his guns and points toward any person that he see. And maybe he only considers shows his guns against known criminals like Team Skull and Team Rocket, as he knows that this people don't have qualms in steals or even harm other innocent people, making them a threat. And looks like Jessie and James are smart enough to learns that Doom Slayer is someone that they don't wants mess aroud, and maybe this means that if they tries to plans a way to steal the pokemon of Ash, they would makes this when Doom Slayer gets separated from the group, like when he went to see Tapu Lele, as the Team Rocket would wants avoid Doom Slayer to prevents their crushing defeat.

And as other important point, was cool see that the Cubone of Doom Slayer could evolved to Marowak, now his first pokemon is more stronger and worthy of be the companion of Doomslayer. Also, i wonder what kind of Fossil pokemon would gets Doom Slayer from the mysterious fossil, though that i still hope that Doom Slayer would gets an Aerodactyl, because could be awesome that he gets a dragon like pokemon as part of his party, and Aerodactyl is a very powerful and fast pokemon, adding that its vicious behaviour would fits with the aggresives style of Doom Slayer. And even if the fossil was described like a stone than an amber or crystal, perhaps this fossil would be part of the bone of a deceased Aerodactyl, after all, it is possible that exists normal fossils of the bones of Aerodactyl than only the old ambers.
Greninjaten99 chapter 8 . 7/22
great chapter, it didn't seem slow to me, these kind of stories help build up suspense, it get more exciting to read. yay Cubone evolved... what will his other pokemon be... I swear if he catches a legendary the pokemon and Doom universe will never be the same... it already changed but you know what I mean. keep up the awesome work.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15
This is actually pretty amazing I wouldn't have expected this concept to be good to I want MOOORRRREEEE
Guest chapter 7 . 6/18
Regarding to your point, if Doom Slayer meets Yvetal, this certainly could brings the worst scenario that the legendary pokemon wishes to prevents to all cost, as without doubt our Doom hero would attacks Yvetal without holding back, as its dark energy could triggers the killer instint of Doom Slayer (Rips and Tear).

And i guess that considering the boost of power given by the Seraphim and the Praetor armor, the Oblivion wing of Yvetal cannot kills or even harms Doom Slayer, after all he withstood the corruption of the hell itself during a millenia, even before to be found by the night sentinels, gets his armor and boost of power from the Seraphim. And even if Yvetal was inmune to normal weapons like arrows, i guess that its resistance don't includes the advanced arsenal of Doom Slayer, meaning that if Yvetal has the tough luck of meets Doom Slayer, this bird would be the prey and Doom slayer the predator.
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 7 . 6/18
Pls update this is fucking great also the checovz chaingun slayers gonna encounter yveltal isnt he?
Also idc all that much but there was a consistency error scythers slash attack didnt faze doom slayer yet if his armor was so severely weakened that a arbok could chomp it it should have at least scratched the armor.
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