Reviews for The Advent of Thunder
hansgyver62 chapter 4 . 9/5
Update soon
Guest chapter 4 . 7/30
Great stuff more soon please
Piouspoppy41355 chapter 4 . 7/16
Great story not sure how I feel about zoro being dead tho it does make sense, but great story either way can’t wait for the next chapter!
Vansmoke chapter 3 . 6/7
he could use reincarnated crews rather than stealing canon ones.
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 4 . 5/29
hey, luffy and dragon are father and son, and yet they could not be more different if they tried. so the fans should learn to suck it up and deal with it. Naruto and Xebec might be related, but that does not automatically mean they will be the same personality wise.

i can safely say i am NOTHING like my grandfather on my dads side of the family. though i loved the man till the day he died, my grandfather could be a right bigoted racist prick when he wanted to be. now he was very much a product of his environment and the times he grew up in. so i do not blame him. i do not agree with him, but i didn't blame him either.

he's dead now, so getting mad at him about something like that is a moot point.

but the point stands. just because you are related to someone, does not automatically make you just like them. so no, naruto is NOT going to be like Xebec, because he is NOT Xebec, he is Xebec's GRANDSON! while he might eventually develop a few personality traits SIMILAR to his grandfather, he will never be just like the man.

people need to learn to actually THINK BEFORE THEY SPEAK! or write in this case.

its moments like this that prove an old argument of mine.

Common sense isnt.

thank you for your time.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
This is utter crap.
Deadfist02 chapter 4 . 5/22
Dont listen to any naysayers my man! You are doing a splendid job with the story and the characters.

Just dont bring any more characters from Naruto.

I kinda wish that Luffy had already saved Zoro. Luffy as Naruto's rival would have been cool for the plot.

I love all the blood gore and brutality! Hopefully some adult action soon aswell though hopefully not forcefully rushed, but still plenty.

Keep up the good work, waiting for updates.
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 4 . 4/26
Go on, please, put the story is very good, Do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison.
LL chapter 4 . 3/27
This is actually pretty good. Can't wait to see an update
Samuel Santillan chapter 1 . 3/15
me gustaron los miembros pero quien mas se unira y que tab fuerte es en verdad naruto d,xeckers
Samuel Santillan chapter 2 . 3/15
me encanta quiero mas capitulos habra harem, naruto querra ser rey pirata
R1VN chapter 1 . 3/6
Yo im getting SWTOR vibes from you're summary.
Uchiha Angga-sama chapter 4 . 3/3
ohhh so sad, theres no marimo zoro and hentai cook sanji.
demon87 chapter 4 . 2/25
super
Samuel Santillan chapter 3 . 2/4
has harem con namie,robin,kushina,monet,nojico ect
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