| Reviews for Wrong Move |
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   monbade chapter 1 . 6/29 needs more |
| PappyOldGuy chapter 1 . 6/24 Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted. Thank you so much for sharing. |
| Furwing Silverclaw chapter 1 . 6/14 Wow I just reread this and I really want to see more at least a sequel showing some of the repercusions. |
| aisa.32 chapter 1 . 6/3 Please more. |
| dolph25 chapter 1 . 5/17 Great story, thanks |
| The Geeky Folkteller chapter 1 . 5/7 And now he can live his own life. Hey, maybe immigrant to America and set up shop, use his money and influence to become a business tycoon for Magical America. I can see it now: HARRY POTTER, THE ELON MUSK OF THE MACUSA! |
| thelibaryian93 chapter 1 . 4/27 excellent ! |
| toile grant chapter 1 . 4/20 good |
| TheDarkFallenOneOfLight chapter 1 . 3/11 This is a fantastic one-shot story that I can easily see being expanded upon. I hope you find the needed inspiration to continue this into a larger story. |
| Avana92 chapter 1 . 2/27 this was great, I love these stories! |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 1 . 2/22 Great story thanks for sharing |
| The God of Perverts chapter 1 . 2/2 Damn it! I want more! So good! |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 1/29 You were not tough enough on the other idiots. |
| GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 1/27 Excellent story. Schadenfreude is not nice but it feels soo good! |
| Mikeblade chapter 1 . 1/18 lose his career fudge should be in dementor town harry proved that fudge murdered black by dementor |
