while I always appreciate someone willing to write something for me to read, your grammar and sentence structure are all over the place and frankly make me dizzy trying to follow. The story has potential and I like that you are trying to make Luffy more introspective, however you should try and find someone willing to proof read for and collaborate with you. looking forward to what you do in the future and best wishes.

Please make another chapter soon please.

I like that Luffy has an all female crew but I wished it had genderbent versions of all the original crew members but I like that you're adding other females like Kuina I wish she and Genderbent Ziro were a tag team I know some one needs to die to make them reaffirm their dreams of being the strongest swordsmen in the world but you could had everyone they knew die instead of one of them and can't imagine anyone else making Nami's climatact but Ussop when it comes to the characters we see in the first part of the series great story can't wait to see more.

Great chapter

Fantastic! Keep it up!

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Loving the changes with Nami and the others.
Can’t wait to see what you write for the next chapter.

Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!

KO awesome chapter, glad to see Hachi is a good guy being nice to Nami and keeping Bellemre informed as the former Marine will definitely see how strong Luffy and Kurina are when they fight the Buggy pirates.

Excellent update

Wtf ur grammar

There are some stories that Have Luffy starting out with a different crew, but of the ones I've read the authors have gotten lazy, or lost their drives for the stories. I read two others that had Kuina and one of them got as far as Logue Town and Kuina gave Tashigi a dressing down for looking just like her.

So Kuina is only a C cup? Knowing how the Nami and Robin end up having bigger breasts I wonder if her would grow too.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Wonder if bellmere will join the crew officially when they meet up with nami lol. He deffanattly brings home the girls as it where lol.

Staying a little close to canon, but it’s really interesting that you put Kuina instead of Zoro.

That was amazing! Keep it up!