Great chapter. The part about the old lady caretaker was gut wrenching, I have to admit.

loving this story. and I agree on you with the harem topic to me a harem is a lot of mates not two or three. and I must say that I am glad this is not a harem story I have read to many good stories that were ruined by to many lemons especially long ones or trying to balance to many girls.

muscles, tendons, organs, & even the eye can heal due to the 9 tails healing powers. basically anything short of losing a digit or limb can be recovered. things may take a while but he can heal. i take wolverine's healing factor as an example he can heal any wound so long as he doesn't lose a limb or digit. he even once regrew one of his eyes.

I don't think you know what the word HAREM is, because this is obviously a HAREM!

No one is a perfect, and having Kurenai express or fall pray to her own primal urges is not something that would not be inappropriate, but that's my own opinion. I am enjoying the story so far and liked the camping scene - albeit short; it was worth while.

Great story so far.

I have to notify you that your lime was more like a soft lemon. For the most part limes don't go beyond fore play. When it comes to the act of sex, then you have a lemon. No matter how 'brief' the words used to describe it are.

I don't mind the fem-Kyuubi, it certainly lends some different story line paths and maybe some jealous Hinata moments if nothing else.

This is a very well written piece so far. The attention to detail appears to be of the highest quality when it comes to the biological and stated processes to inducing sleep. While this story is fiction, the placement of accurate and logical information makes it more believable.

While it is tragic to hear about the boys early years, not many stories touch on that part of his history but are quick to either saint or condemn the adults charged with his care. Personally, I am pleased with the direction the story is moving.

Excellent work and I look forward to the next chapter.

Splendid as always! The way the in and outs of the working of a clan (a Kitsune clan to be specific) has been showcased perfectly too. Also, for the mind control part, wouldn't seals do to protect them? And since he had marked all the other vixens, are they obligated to fornicate with him or will it be by their own will? Thanks! And keep em coming yeah?

wow what a chapter is Samui an Uzumaki or Namikaze or both now she needs a ring on her finger to keep others from bugging her and I wonder if Naruto will mark all his Kitsune now

The only sticking point in this to me seems to be Danzo.

I've always thought that Danzo's character was one that truly had no real right to exist in the Naruto-verse. Here's a village of trained ruthless killers, and everyone 'tolerates' this man kidnapping orphans and members of their clans, turning them into mindless drones that do not serve the village as a whole.

If real world rules were applied, the villages various clans would've independently (or jointly) come together and assassinated him decades earlier.d

The fact you have an active investigation into him apparently and there's still not enough "evidence" to simply liquidate all involved just feels like angst/drama for the sake of having it there.

Loved it... but I am positive i've read this exact chapter somewhere else, like... word for word.

You had a mention of "the Yondiame" in there in the debriefing... unless Minato has come back from the dead, I believe you meant the "Sandiame".

Just don't go too far / too long with the constant Sasuke douche-baggery. Sakura mouthed off to a diamyo. She should've been executed on the spot right then and there. The fact it wasn't reported directly by Kurenai in the debriefing and will likely only be revealed from the letter sent by the Diamyo isn't good, and is likely to only make things worse.

There really needs to be genuine consequences for Sakura.

Looking forward to the next update, although I'm not going to lie this basic Team 7 bash shit is a bit cringe. You amplified all of their worst features a thousandfold, nobody likes a bash fic.

Thank you for the chapter. I enjoyed the read a good amount. Perhaps my one grievance is how incredibly one-dimensional Kakashi and Sasuke are coming off here. I personally feel it undermines any depth in their jealousy, but I also understand they're not the focus of things by any measure. That said, I still enjoy reading this story, and it's not enough to stop me, but it is a point I feel could be touched on and improved.