Reviews for Pokémon: Ash and the female champions
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
Nothing like seeding a champion's womb
Blades of Chance chapter 1 . 1/19
I thought I warned about Farla.

(Capitalize your title correctly)

It is.

[Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. ]

Dialogue is written as (Hello," She said) Farla is lying about it

['s really important when writing porn to sound like you]

Technically this is them bashing you.
Farla chapter 1 . 1/19
Capitalize your title correctly.

Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.

["Please have sex with me!" Ash said.
"What?! No!" Diantha said.
"Please Diantha, you have such a nice body. I just gotta have sex with you today." Ash said]

It's really important when writing porn to sound like you, yourself, are old enough to have sex with anyone rather than a small child whose parents should really be keeping a closer eye on.
UltimateCCC chapter 1 . 1/18
I've expected they would've gone longer that that.