This chapter feels good in that it feels believable like an outsider and a spectator coming into a game. I wonder if Kirito and co have any tribal loyalties particularly to J-League teams. Regardless this looks like it could be a lot of fun...

Nice introduction and an interesting scenario. There's real pace to this chapter too so looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.

Such a cool idea! Can’t wait to see how the story plays out

Interesting start! I'm a big fan of soccer/football so its great to see a soccer story written well :). Being a huge fan of the sport, I can help with technical terms and loads of other stuff about the sport if you need, so far so good tho. Keep up the good work!