Reviews for Vision Sequel
Roxy0919 chapter 12 . 10h
Very cute chapter and even with doctors orders they can’t stop themselves. I hope it is a boy and hope fitz gets to experience the pregnancy this time! 5 years already. And so little time. Off to NY they go. Can’t wait
Millie chapter 12 . 8/3
This is the sweetest,craziest, most fun couple ever. I love them. So baby on the way. Yeyy...so happy and reall really hope Futz is here for the whole thing. He deserves it,poor man's missed out on so much. That Liz better watch herself . Fitz is nit a piece of meat. I wanna slap her hard. So Liv decided to move..her sis is gonna throw a fit and then try to guilt or manipulate her into changing her mind. Also happy Daddy and hus babies are getting along so well. Til next time. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
I love this version of Olitz! I'm glad that Fitz gets to be present too. I miss Lucky so I hope they go over.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
They both cum. Lol
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
Liv and Olivia are officially nymphomaniacs
Like seriously they should tone down the sex already
Vanessa said no orgasm
As soon as they got home that's exactly what they did
They should be responsible for the sake of the baby
It's becoming uncomfortable and I like smut a lot!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
Great update! I hope it’s a boy this time!
jennkyle chapter 12 . 8/4
Great chapter great job once again and I can't wait for more
kelleekellkell chapter 12 . 8/3
Can they actually survive 3 days? Too funny.
mschero chapter 12 . 8/2
Loved it! Liv is preggers! FTGIV is cooking in the oven...can't wait for them to experience this together. Great to see Fitz involved in the pregnancy...their dialogue is just hilarious! They are so comfortable with each other...and the move to New York...whohooo! Of course Fitz would have agreed, as long as he's got his Livvie and his kids, he can be literally anywhere in the world. I foresee Erin being a problem with the move...I mean I love Erin but she better support her sis and if not, I would love to see Fitz put her in her place.

Anyhoo, can't wait to see more of Lils and the twins.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
Great update cant wait for more, always happy when i see your story
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
Just love this version of forward to the next you
GuestZA chapter 12 . 8/2
Exciting times for our favorites! I can only imagine how the girls will take the news of a new sibling. I hope it's going to be a boy! Fitz is beside himself with happiness - they both deserve this moment.
They've had enough drama to last a lifetime.
Thank you so much for the frequent updates. We appreciate you!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/2
Awww loved it
Guest chapter 12 . 8/1
I love their love
Sassafrass4 chapter 12 . 8/2
These two are hilarious! Orgasm by accident..lol. You really know how to write this story. I love how happy and excited Fitz is about the pregnancy. Please come back when you can.
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