While the fic starts fairly wonky, and slightly confusing, it definitely becomes much more cohesive and altogether better as it goes on. This chapter especially has hooked me. I really want to know more about Cinder and Weiss's relationship as well as why Weiss was forced to break up with Ruby.

I'm also loving the fact that Yang and Blake broke up. It's something you rarely see in fanfiction, and even if they get back together, it's still a great starting place. Ditto with Ruby and Weiss.

So, I guess I shall be waiting patiently and joyfully for your next chapter. You've earned yourself a follower. :)

Yang, you b! Why? I know you're pissed, but still...