Reviews for The Fantasy Hero
Shirosaki Kizuro chapter 5 . 7/12
Waiting for the Bird Brain Hell Crow to make her cameo here as she's my Touhou waifu in a way. Please keep up the good work!
altron15 chapter 5 . 7/3
Love it, I really like this fic, can't wait for the next chapter, question, this is before the four season incident? to let him experiment his first incident gensokyo style.
zekses chapter 4 . 7/1
This fic is a really bad ripoff of "Monster of Logic" by Alxariam. It's subpar on every level
Mono chapter 5 . 6/27
What type of Magic Izuku will specialize in? Like Marisa, she's a human who can use Magic specifically specializing on light and heat magic. I'd like to see what spellcards Izuku will have. Since Izuku Midoriya's name relates to green valley, I'm guessing that his spells will be related to Sanae? Or one of the MoF bosses... Or Yuuka
Ramen is great chapter 5 . 6/26
Will Izuku got his own ability or he will be like Marisa?
Ramen is great chapter 5 . 6/25
Will Izuku gain his own ability or he will be like Marisa?
Nicholas chapter 5 . 6/25
I like this and i have 2 questions numer 1 will izuku become a youkai? cos if yes the best choices would be either a kitsune or a kamaitachi(sickle-weasel) number 2 will he learn any martial arts when he's going into melee combat?
PasiveNox chapter 5 . 6/25
Yeah interesting
bowham123 chapter 5 . 6/25
Nice
ChimaTigon chapter 5 . 6/25
Are you going to add in PC-Era characters?
bowham123 chapter 1 . 6/9
Nice
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6
"Trio of villains that simply stole women's panties." Are you refering to perverted trio from DXD by anychance?.
Skeletalrepublic chapter 4 . 5/9
tbh I thought this story was gonna be snoozefest, but it's actually pretty entertaining.

I usually don't like fanfics that change Izuku's powers, but this is pretty good with how you handle the pacing of the story and how the characters interact.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/26
What will Izuku's Spellcard names be? And what kind of pattern will it be like? I really love this.
xyzdreadnought chapter 4 . 4/22
heh, seems like a neat story, and it will be fun to see where you go with it. I'm also a sucker for examining the consiquences of Sanae's disappearance.

but you need an editor my dude, someone to proofread your work to filter out grammatical errors, for example I notice you frequently forget to pluralise.

if you can't get an editor, then I suggest getting a text to speech program to read your story to you, that makes it easier to find mistakes yourself.
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