Reviews for The Unseen
CaitHawke4Ever chapter 10 . 5/4
Sorry you are having a hard time. Get better and come back to writing when you are ready to do so. MaiXNaru forever!
nagisa akabane chapter 10 . 4/29
Stay safe author, and dont mind the negativity around you.
nagisa akabane chapter 9 . 4/28
Pleasee update and is it possible that there can be any changes in this story like for example mai actually the first one to solve the case and casualky giving hints to naru

Hehe
CaitHawke4Ever chapter 9 . 3/23
This reminded me of how the original set up of the equipment went. Of course in the original Mai did not have so much trouble setting up the shelves. Update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 9 . 3/23
I like how she tease him.
CaitHawke4Ever chapter 8 . 3/16
Glad you are not straying to far from canon. Love how clueless Mai is right now to the fact that the reason everything Naru told her is familiar is because of her physic abilities. Update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 8 . 3/15
He is so... flirting with her.
Kallen21 chapter 7 . 3/13
Can't wait for the next chapter
Jira03 chapter 7 . 3/9
i like it!

please continue.

I will be rooting for you.
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 7 . 3/8
this will be fun!
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 6 . 3/2
I bet she would like to know more about him since I bet she must have realised that he probably already have Intel about her. He can't escape Mai now. So...what will happen?
Kallen21 chapter 6 . 3/2
Can't wait for the next chapter
CaitHawke4Ever chapter 6 . 3/2
Same old way Kuroda butted in and the classic way Naru got Mai to work for him. Things are going to get very interesting and fun from here on . Update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!
Kallen21 chapter 5 . 2/26
Can't wait for the next chapter
Chocoholic202 chapter 5 . 2/25
Please continue to update.
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