| Reviews for Roses Among Heroes Reaper's Honor |
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   The Gatekeeper's Souls chapter 63 . 4/13 You should definitely go with "This Will be the Day". I feel that it will speak out a lot more to the students as well as expressed how dire the world really is. |
| darkvampirekisses chapter 63 . 4/9 I vote This Will Be The Day! |
| darkvampirekisses chapter 12 . 4/8 *dies laughing at the end scene* |
| catastrophiqu chapter 63 . 4/3 this will be the day reason is it seems like hey this is the day you'll hear our song also with it best describing remnant |
| Draedons Forge chapter 63 . 4/2 I agree with FinchFlyingAce. Both songs are great. Also, what should Qrow x Midnight be called? |
| Draedons Forge chapter 62 . 4/2 Basically canon Argus Limited. |
| F.M.D chapter 63 . 4/2 This will be the day. That is an amazing song, and describes Ruby's desires for the future, all that clearer. |
| FinchFlyingAce chapter 63 . 4/2 Have them do one, and then people cheer for an encore and they do the other one |
| F.M.D chapter 62 . 3/26 Oh, a view on Remnant, nice change of pace. |
| Draedons Forge chapter 61 . 3/26 “So is Aizawa your dad?” The Teacher hid behind his scarf. Legit laughed. Also, a song from Remnant? How about “This Life Is Mine”, “Let’s Just Live”, or “The Triumph?” All three are songs released from before V6 canonically so it’s lore-friendly. |
| F.M.D chapter 61 . 3/26 I can't stop smiling. I just love it. |
| Draedons Forge chapter 60 . 3/25 Yang is officially, an aunt. |
| F.M.D chapter 60 . 3/25 Ruby is officially, an aunt. |
| Draedons Forge chapter 59 . 3/23 Peace For All. pfffft. Slightly weird name, and I still think Once And For All was a better name. Right, let me get to the point. I think you should either specify POV or change to a third-person writing style. Now, 3rd Person POV may be hard to pull off, but it usually leads to understanding a scene more. I almost couldn’t tell who was the POV in that Blake scene. 3rd POV makes it structured more like an actual piece of literature by an actual author. And you can hear everyones opinions. Obviously, it’s your choice, but if you do plan on switching, best you either proofread it for inconsistencies or get a beta. Longer chapters usually employ this tactic for the best experience. If you do plan on expanding your chapters, this would be best. If you REALLY wanna get technical, if there is a slight time-skip, you could detail how long after a scene and where the setting is in a subtitle at the beginning of a line break. I think it’s best if you practice doing this if you do plan on employing it and start actually doing it next volume. |
| F.M.D chapter 59 . 3/23 Looks like things are getting interesting. |
