The idea is cool and while you had a couple of grammar errors you write well. I hope you update soon because i really liked it! ;)

That was a very good chapter, sooo when is the next one

Hoohohohohohohoho, let the talk down and misunderstanding begin...and is the hunter going to be the ruthless enforcer of the Gods and make sure they follow the rules

Another decent chapter, unfortunately your grammar got worse for this one.

Good first chapter, you really need to keep an eye out on your words though. Multiple times you used a completely different word than the one I assume you intended.

For example right at the end of this chapter: 'more work to do here than he TAUGHT!' I assume you mean thought?
'he was just REVEALED the pain had stopped.' I assume you mean relieved?
I noticed more however I would rather not get called a grammar nazi so two examples will have to do.

That aside I am looking forward to more.

Keep it up

Good

great stuff so far, looking forward to more.

I really freaking like this!
I just want much, much more of this!

Damn I'm liking this, keep up the good work.

Ah, soul sacrifice librom? Can we expect a magusar cameo in the future?

the girls do look good, not as breathing taking as Maria or the Doll though

Nice work on this. Looks promising.

Keep at it.

Amazing story. Take your time updating!

This is story is pretty good so far, i hope you'll continue writing it.