Dude, theres a story about midoriya having access to the fricking infinity gauntlet and its a lot more complex to read and not as disappointing to read than your take on MHA, You definitely have the potential to make a character with pretty interesting motives and philosophy seeing as you wrote one of the best DC superheroes fanfictions simply by having your original character dominate literally anything and everything because having him assert dominance as the alpha is what makes your stories so good

Hmm, I don't know why but there are so many mistakes in this fic that it made me doubt it was actually written by you. I've read other stuff from you and actually enjoyed them a lot but this fic, for some reason, is NOT up to your level.

-His personality is all over the place. I kinda get what you're trying to do but it makes no sense nonetheless. Somehow, he's mentally less healthy than cannon Izuku. Why? There is no reason for him to be so. If you started this fic from his childhood and showed us that the bullying was waay worse than it was in cannon then it would make sense but so far, there is nothing to suggest that the first 13 years of life were in any way, shape or form different than cannon Izuku's was. So the changes, regardless of how much they add to the story, end up making no sense.
-It took the entire school waay too short of a time to start hating him more than they did when he was quirkless. Also, why would Izuku care? Izuku never cared about the bad opinions others had about him, unless he knows he deserves it. Well, he cares about Katsuki's opinions but the rest are actually worthless to him, no matter how much that might sound like something Katsuki would think... Izuku is actually quite the hypocrite, you know.
-I thought his quirk was precision, not 'Man Up Against Kacchan but stay the same pussy against everyone else'?
-This Izuku is seemingly incapable of understanding a lot of the things cannon Izuku had no problem doing so, despite there being no changes big enough to change him like that. (I mean yeah, he has a quirk now but he gained a quirk in canon as well so...)
-Bakugou isn't capable of the thought process that would lead him to realize how much of a scum he actually is. Even in cannon, even after learning abou OFA, he still hasn't actually apologized. Because he still doesn't see anything wrong with how he behaved all those years and continues to do so.
-There is more to parkour than just precision. It requires developing the muscles on your legs and back(and quite a bit of arms as well) almost like no other sport. If someone without the necessary muscles tried jumping from rooftop to rooftop, they would end up either not making it all the way and falling to their death or just hurt their ankles and legs enough to require treatment.

Hope this doesn't come off as a flame. I don't really care if people hate me for leaving a negative review but I don't want to have a negative effect on anyone's enthusiasm on writing.

bro podrias aser uno de marvel con el poder de the gamer

I do gotta respect that with you making everyone more rational, you are also giving All For One a ridiculously overpowered moveset. The powers in the shows weren't weak per say, but an immortal with the power to steal quirks, and AFO didn't make himself as invincible as possible? At UA alone there are over a dozen he could have benefitted from, and when you multiply that pool of powers by the decades he has been alive, and all the many, many other people, in hero programs or not, All For One should have had hundreds of Emitter Quirks coming out of his ass rather than the make-shift brute strength method he did use. As usual, fantastic story, please keep writing.

The child of that marriage would just be too OP. Holy hell, even if they needed to try several times the sheer potential to be gained would be so worth it. Kid would just rule the world with 250 IQ and Perfect Precision in all pursuits.

For some reason reading this fic, I genuinely feel scared. Of the precise stuff, the situation between izuku and everyone. I know its your style of writing and I like it, but I dont at the same time. It really freaks me out thinking about how bad the world is, not just in this story but the whole world. Perfection is unattianable and solving every problem is impossible.

Great story, honestly can't criticize anything about it that isn't part of the author's unique writing style. Please keep writing, I am addicted. (No pressure)

Iiiii think I'm fucked in the head...cause I'm more excited at how good everything is turning out cause that means the inevitable crash will be that much worse...perfect author for me than yeah?

At first I was pleased..,this is gonna turn out great...then I remembered the who wrote this...ahhhhhhhh shit.

“Just her looking at me makes me harder than porno of mutant-type girls hitting it with a guy with a tentacle quirk” LMAOOOOOO. MHA’s in-verse porn has to have some freaky shit

Wait, he did the entire moonlight sonata? And people just sat there listening for 17 minutes?

This reminds me of an anime called (Haven’t you heard I’m Sakamoto)

Please, I know you're a busy man, but keep updating this... dropping DC was bad but this too...

Is it just me? Or is Intelli-chan starting to look like an easy kill with no repercussion?

Among the best bnha fanfics i've read on any site, really different in how much you're willing to change from canon. Can't wait for the next chapter and when Midoriya finally goes to UA.