Reviews for Irredeemable |
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Richard76310 chapter 4 . 6/5 .ACES. Superb ending. Only thing left unanswered is who was the older man? Would Casey have portrayed him? |
Richard76310 chapter 3 . 6/5 Had wondered why he had a Polish phrase and she didn't understand Polish but it was revealed. Friends with Ellie bonding over cooking. Just awesome. |
Richard76310 chapter 2 . 6/5 Need more Chucks in the world |
Richard76310 chapter 1 . 6/5 Not sure what to say. Strong. Emotional. Moving. Sad. Uplifting. Is there anything yo can't write? |
bigfan22 chapter 4 . 3/29 Damn good fic. My only complaint was that it was so short. I'm curious if you could take this idea and make another story. I would love to see a fic where this scenario happened, but after Chuck and Sarah got together, he somehow still receives the Intersect. Having Sarah become a real girl that becomes his bodyguard without returning to the CIA would def make for an interesting read. Great job as always and thanks for writing! |
CraigBes007 chapter 4 . 3/16 Like I said good finish but a real hard start to this one , but think you once again for the time you put all your story's |
CraigBes007 chapter 1 . 3/16 Just read this, very close to home for me this Chapter for me but knowing your story's should end well |
Pinkbow27 chapter 4 . 3/13 just catching up on reading list. (aka fanfic alerts) short but sweet |
Roger chapter 4 . 3/10 Great Story. Thank you. |
baldcoder chapter 4 . 3/3 A great little story. Thanks for sharing. |
baldcoder chapter 3 . 3/3 Sweet update! I like it. |
WillieGarvin chapter 4 . 2/15 Just great, David. Sarah Bartowski. Awesome. |
Greg6419 chapter 4 . 2/13 Just so. And a lesson we should all heed. Thanks G |
chucksboxers chapter 4 . 2/13 Great job DC - a very interesting story with a strong message! Plus Charah of course! Thanks! |
kehwie chapter 4 . 2/13 3 3 3 3 |