Subsonic .50 cal huh? Subsonic means slower than the speed of sound. Which seems kinda counterintuitive when using a sniper rifle especially a .50 cal

Hey hey hey! Wassup punk!? Here from web novel. Absolutely love the fic you wrote! Gamer system, evil, psychopathic MC and RAPE! what else do you need in life? Actually, I was wondering exactly that! If you haven't read any rape then what the fuck are you doing?! Spice up yo life bitch!(Coming from someone who lives a daily monotone life) Hmm, makes me ponder about lolis... let's end it here.

Uuuuhhh I'd rather not join a dickcord thank very much, sounds pretty gay to me eheh.
On a more serious note, I'm enjoying this. Not too many writers change the world/realm/universe this early on, it is refreshing.

okokok so... he just made himself a bloody space marine with extra mind powers!

I eagerly await more. I do hope though that you won’t spend too much time on the Familiar of Zero world. If you do decide to do so, perhaps it could be a separate fic. Whatever the case, I like your character and story so far despite the fact that there does appear to be a lot of filler.

Nice

Ok, I need to appologise. I really hated the breaking of the 4 wall, so I threw a fit, but then I decided to continue.

It was mostly quite cool. His psychopathic ways, lemons, manipulations, not giving a damn... I loved how he forced powerful mages to be his servants. Not even once did he consider behaving like goody two shoes heroes. I hope that he will seduce Louise and the princess and will take them as his pets. Of course, long mind games with maniputating brain chemistry would be nice. And Siesta - as long as he doesn't fall in love, he could always do what nobles do with maids...

I would slightly tone down system being an ass and MC acting like a weeb.

This is brilliant. The protagonist has a talent for theatrics which I heavily enjoy.

And on the matter of structuring speech, the first is to replace 'said' with vocal adjectives 'stuttered', 'muttered', 'articulated', 'expressed'. Each have their contexts, so you have to select an adjective which suits the context. Second is to use identifiers, what else identifies Louis instead of her name? Maybe 'void mage', the 'third daughter of House Vallière' et cetera. So in practice, you could say: "stuttered the Void Mage" instead of just using "said Louis".

Nice chapter dude

Plz update soon

I immediately dropped the story after breaking the 4 wall

Please update soon

hahahahahah he is acting loke gilgamesh, fking awesome

Sorry man I don't play war-thunder and it's a pain to install but I would totally help you out if I did man. Have a great day.

Hahaha!