Reviews for Viper Addams
beansandweenies013 chapter 1 . 5/27
can you update please
god of all chapter 3 . 5/17
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
ej-83 chapter 3 . 5/1
expelled ad pugsley... lol... if he joins hogwarts.. then all hell will break loose
mackiechandler chapter 3 . 4/30
CUTE!
zakuranavarro chapter 3 . 4/26
Sigue pliss
enji-benjy chapter 1 . 4/24
You need to fix the punctuation, desperately. There are spaces and line breaks missing to the point this is practically unreadable.
ej-83 chapter 2 . 3/13
did the addams inform narcissa that viper is her goddaughter when they had dinner together?let the chaos begin
zakuranavarro chapter 2 . 3/11
Sigue sigue sigueee~ porfavor
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 3/2
Kind of confused that you posted the second half of the last chapter again.
ShadowTomes chapter 1 . 3/1
Hello. I wanted to read this but couldn't get passed the fact that all the text was centered. If you could please fix that I'd be happy to read it then.
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 3/1
love this, i always love Harry or his female version being raised by the Addams.
LadyPhoenix68 chapter 1 . 3/1
You really need to go over this on grammarly or other spell/word checker software and proofread. You have run on sentences, missing punctuation (double quotation marks, missing apostrophe, missing commas, no space between words and start of a quote, missing period at end of sentences), and bad words (hole instead of whole, dept instead of debt "9 3/4 quarter's" possessive instead of "9 3/4 quarters" plural, "them family" instead of "the family"). If you shift speaker, you should always start a new paragraph.

This makes what could be a very good story concept very hard to read.
ibterismith50 chapter 1 . 2/29
Why doesn't update?
Nogitsune96 chapter 1 . 2/28
More Release
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 2/17
I like the story so far and hope you continue it. :D But you should edit it and put it in proper paragraph fornat, instead of leaving everybodys lines mashed in together in one single parargraph.

Plus when Viper got her Hogwarts letter, WHAT name did she get invited to Hogwarts under? Her new Addams name, or did her old Potter name letter came in instead? The letter doesn't show. *lol*

if the letter came with her Addams name she should bring it with her so she can shove it in the faces of anybody what name is legally hers, because if the magic of Hogwarts accepted her new name and identity enough to send her a letter under that name why should she let everybody else try and tell her what name THEY want her to go by. *lol*

Wait HOW and WHEN did Albus Dumbledore 'administer' a Clumsy potion, a Clueless Potion, a Loyalty potion, AND a Love Potion to Viper?! The ONLY time hea been around her was the night he dumped at the Dursleys AFTER Hagrid brought her to him there, and then Morticia ran off with her afterwards. Plus shouldn't he have been physically NEAR Viper some time in the last 10 years in order to 'administer' she would need to DRINK in order to get them inside her?

The old coot didn't 'administer' ANYTHING to Viper before leaving her on the doorstep, and unless he immediately realized she was missing and has been looking for her for the last ten years, how can he have 'administered' those potions to her without being ANYWHERE near her since he didn't even know WHERE she was in order to give them to her? Especially with that 'Love Potion keyed to Ron Weasley' one. He must have planned THAT one with Molly AFTER he left her with the Dursleys.

So why does she have potions that SHOULDN'T be registered inside at all her showing up in the Gringotts tests? Wouldn't the Addams have found all those themselves and removed them themselves over the years including the blocks the old coot put on her? Especially after that ritual they did to her as a baby when they adopted her?

Better yet WHEN and HOW did he put blocks on her while shes been safely living with the Addamd?! *lol* Everything I said about the potions applies here too.
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