Reviews for Jaune and the Real Girl
AxDevilman chapter 26 . 7/27
Poor Penny.
Hope Ironwood's intervention helps. But I don't believe Jaune and Penny will react well if they learned of this plan of his.

I'm quite anxious for their date. On one hand; it would surely be wholesome and cute. On the other hand; Vasily could decide to kill two birds with one stone and ruin their night.
I'm looking forward to it nonetheless.
ThanosofTitan chapter 26 . 7/27
Short but good chapter. Looking forward to the date... and Blake is very kind.
Mengsk chapter 26 . 7/27
Near the end? Now I can only wonder if the final confrontation is during the date or the morning after while Jaune takes the children to school.
ThanosofTitan chapter 25 . 7/21
Looking forward to seeing how the date goes, and I hope it isn't interrupted by an attack, at least not too early. I want to see them get a chance to enjoy themselves a bit.
Adro-Sama chapter 25 . 7/20
I'm curious about Penelope, if Jaune and Penny could rescue her or will she be the final boss
Also love the details one Bonnie, I always was curious about her background history
AxDevilman chapter 25 . 7/20
So Penelope is getting a different mindset than Penny, that's good.
It's also cool to get more backstory of Vasily and Bonnie's relationship trhough simple dialogue.

Jaune and Penny are cute together, shame there's a hunter with a killing machine preparing for battle.
Argus456 chapter 25 . 7/20
And thus Jaune left a trail of trail of broken hearts in his wake...though this just might make him more alluring for some of the mothers though the fact that his girlfriend is the Protector of Mantle might keep them from doing anything beyond looking.

As for Penelope...I can see things going down a rather dark path if she continues to learn behaviors from Vasily though the fact that she's effectively stalking Jaune and Penny as well as the rest of their friends, she might develop a sense of curiosity that could turn to envy if things go a certain way...
ksgrip chapter 25 . 7/19
Honestly, couldn't care less for vasily and his whole arc.
AxDevilman chapter 24 . 7/19
This is an awesome fic, not many Penny x Jaune out there and less so with such a big plot besides the romance.

I'm looking forward to the moment Penelope becomes a known danger to our heroes, and how they'll deal with her.
And her existence will bite Jimmy in the ass more than it already has, I'm sure of it.

And it's great they're together now. I wonder how it will progress from here.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Bryan217 chapter 24 . 7/14
Horay!
ThanosofTitan chapter 24 . 7/13
That was sweet. I bet the fact that they 'slept together' is going to cause a lot of rumors to circulate, though.
MajorBrony95 chapter 24 . 7/13
Yay! Our two sweeties are finally together! Can't wait to see what the final Arc (ha, ha) has to offer.
Argus456 chapter 24 . 7/13
Phew, nothing too major happened...well, terrorist bombing aside that is but at least things didn't escalate as much as I thought it would, terror wise. Though the progress with Jaune and Penny's newfound relationship was adorable, awkward yes, but oh so adorable.
IROCK108 chapter 23 . 7/9
Super noice.
Haseo55 chapter 23 . 7/6
I would't mind a whole chapter of Jaune and Penny just making out.
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