Reviews for Childhood Sweethearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this, thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing this adventure with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great stuff! Loved the end. Thanks so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() great , very well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though parts of this seemed rather crack, this is a good ‘fix everything at once’ type story. The main action takes place early and the rest of it is mainly reactions. You have three things particularly I like: 1. A large role for the Goblins. They came through in getting the taint out of Harry and then finding most of the rest. 2. A large role for Amelia Bones. She’s a favorite of mine and badly underused in canon. Her getting the Diary, getting Malfoy into Azkaban and ending Voldemort made me happy. 3. Getting Dumbledore out of the picture. In consideration, Albus is as much a Dark Lord as Tom. Favorited and Thanks for sharing. TGM |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd have loved it if the story had shown us the reactions in Hogwarts to their bond, but even without that, this was an utterly delightful story. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very well-plotted, well-written story. It had several common elements to stories like this, but the use of them was well thought out and believable. I'm also not a huge fan of H/Hr, though I read it, and I've lost my taste for young!Harry stories, but again, you did a great job of making what happened believable. You also managed to pull back from having Rob have an over-the-top reaction to the marriage and be an idiot as well. I really hate that trope! He must be a reasonably intelligent man and I'm glad you had him act like it. I would actually enjoy a continuation to see how Hogwarts handles an already married boy-who-lived, but this one-shot has a finished feel to it. Thanks for an enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliantly done Thanks for sharing your wonderful works Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit of a cop out what happened to Dumbledore but a overall a pleasurable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fun story. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() Something old - the veil. Something new - her Easter dress. Something borrowed - the veil again. Something blue - the aquamarine. Oops. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. I liked the way you wrapped everything up before he attended Hogwarts, including Dumbledore. By having him and Hermione bonded you didn't have to develop a relationship while in school. Thank you for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story, thank you. One thing always pops into my mind when I read bonding fics. It is the question why everyone says to the boy to treat the girl right. Harry is an orphand an his family hates him. Hermione is not always the nicest person so why is he the only person who needs to be responsible. It makes me sad. Your story is really loveley it is just a thought I had. |