I loved the chapter, I can not wait to see the dialogue of the kings and if Lelouch supported the way Arturia see how a king should be.

I will follow the story from now on and comment more in the future.

Having chosen Nobunaga as the servant of Lelouch seemed great, they are a somewhat strange and symmetrical combination

didnt king arthurs bloodline die with him ? and none of his dependents were kings or royalty after him?

The Feast of Kings is here can't wait for thing to start

I love your story. The pacing is good and the way the characters behave feels realistic. The dialogue could use a bit of work but its slowly become better as I got into chapter 9. Grammar, while iffy at first also got better by this chapter. It’s got me hyped for the next chapter...

My worst complaint i S. You don’t really need to describe their appearance every time, I think it breaks the immersion of the story. You should describe them when someone new shows up and is meeting them from their PoV for the first time.

meow update

Zouken right now:

Teehee i'm in danger

Whoo it's getting heated now.

I read this fan fiction to see the heroes' reactions to Lelouch’s life. I hope he shows his past to everyone present at the banquet

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You occasionally switch between saying Lulu's eyes are purple and black (specifically using the word raven)

Her NP had the insignia of Japan, so that would make it unlikely that she was lying/bluffing (Kiri might still consider it a possibility though, depending on if he is paranoid).

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Considering how Christianity is viewed in Japan, the church's size most likely has more to do with the Grail War (even if only due to the Tohsaka being Christian).

How old is Risei? I cannot see him being made the supervisor as a teen, but if he wasn't then he would be in his 80s-90s...and Kirei is only in his 30s-40s. While not impossible for him to have sired a son in his 50s, it would be very unusual.

Not sure how Oda is depicted in Fate, but historically, Oda was tolerant of Christianity (and compared to Buddhism he was practically an adherent lol).

Sensing a strong ménage à trois not gonna lie.

I suddenly came up with a guess of why Lelouch needs to get the Grail without Lelouch knowing the real reason to.

Lelouch would be the one to absorb the dark prana making him materialize his Zero outfit but with magic glowling gem stones and form fitting Armour. :v

Another great chapter.

Good luck with your pull for her too man. Also hope you update the next chapter soon

Nice .
Also suggestion for Grail talk .
Discuss consequences of Arturia's wish and why she is wrong .
First thing . Butterfly effect . As Kotal Kahn from MK said
" Our lives are cloth, woven from choice and circumstance. Pull even one thread, that cloth is torn asunder and made worthless"
We are talking about changing lives of millions, if not billions people , who were affected by Arturia's reign and legend . She can kill or erase from existence too many people .

Second . Knight of Round Table . Arturia has no right to play with their lives . No right to take away their accomplishments, feats and achievements they have earned. Not to mention... What about their bonds? Does Arturia has any value to their friendship or it means nothing at all ? All this time they spent together ? All those hardships and time they shared ?
I bet if Nobu Or Lelouch touch this, everybody will be angered . Nobu, Lelouch, Iskandar and even Gil , who treasured his time with Enkidu and Siduri.

Third . Possibility of wish even occurring . I think Fuyuki system and nothing less then Moon Cell can realize Arturia's wish properly. Why ? Bcz of sheer strength that is required to overwrite World's influence.
Hell. Even Manaka Sajyo for all her power couldn't bypass that with strength of 6 servants Grail .
Although she can use her Connection to the Root in order to realize Saber's wish of an eternal Britain, the correcting force of the world's Quantum Time Lock would easily reverse this. That's why she wanted to use Beast as a boost of mana for her abilities, overcoming the limits of her circuit quantity.

So... Saber's wish is impossible to grant . I genuinely hope servants will also this fact at her face and give helluva "Reason you suck speach"

Gilgamesh for example totally should be aware of this bcz of his wisdom and intellect . If anything , he will enjoy face of Arturia once she hears impossibility of her wish .

Not to mention how selfish this wish is no matter what Saber tries to prove to herself about selflessness and noble intentions