Reviews for The Bone Weaver Alchemist
TranquilPanda chapter 4 . 7/6
I truly do hope you decide to continue with this fic. It's a great one! Pretty novel idea as well. I know you've thrown in a few hints of Jaune possibly going back to Remnant and I fully support you if you do decide to head in that direction. I also find it pretty refreshing to see that you haven't made Jaune out to be a combat-focused alchemist, instead going to the medical route. So far the story has been great! I do hope you'd update though, it's been a few months compared to your earlier speed in updating. It may help for you to spend a bit longer in between each chapter before uploading since it'd give you time for quality as well as keeping your inspiration steady. Hope you're doing well with the coronavirus and 2020 shit happening, stay safe! Looking forward to the next chapter!
lxXxJerBearxXxl chapter 4 . 6/17
This story is solid, thank you. Keep it up
raychii521 chapter 4 . 6/15
well it was an interesting Jaune arc tale.
avjuan37 chapter 4 . 4/29
please make more chapters
jonathan.jt.batz chapter 1 . 3/30
Star Wars reference! I’m happy I’m not the only one that remembers that movie/cartoon
Guest chapter 3 . 3/11
You sir, are a genius. Fate Grand order's Florence Nightingale
MM Browsing chapter 4 . 2/26
sorry it just your story fill me up with idea just paragraph or two won’t be enough I don’t know if I should just PM you instead or just post it on review
BTW thank you so much for answer my question and I glad to help build up some idea
sorry again making big and thank you

I really like this chapter, showing jaune becoming family with the rockbell and elric. Being the big brother for winry
Although I wish to see jaune training his automail arms

I know jaune become a doctor but its jaune also an automail engineer as well?
Will jaune going to be train by Izumi Curtis as well?

what is jaune goal or role in this story? will he help ed and al find restore their bodies?
maybe jaune method will be more like a research like you did with jim note
log #
I’m being studying chimera alchemist more specifically using salamanders mix with other animal.
While ed and al searching way to restore their bodies like finding the philosopher's stone
It is my hope to use reptiles regenerate lost parts to my advantage.
However is only possible with ed situation to restore his arm and leg while al have no body to begin with
In al case I decide to study Soul Transmutation

I like how jaune mistook his circle-less alchemy as semblance (I wonder he mistook his circle-less alchemy similar to weiss glyph) and then jaune accidently using his aura to scan a person body like how shirou use tracing from fate stay night. If jaune learn the Alkahestry from xing then jaune can apply to his aura even better but I think is better to learn it near the end and the sequel.

So jaune aura can heal himself and other people and scan a person health. The only thing jaune need to discover how to use his aura is Defense, Offense, Unlock Aura, Extrasensory perception (maybe that should cross out because the scene with Izumi scan health), Climate protection.

After mention DivineWhiskey and scar, it got me thinking will jaune aura protect him from being Deconstruction from scar because unless scar can understand how aura work he cannot damage jaune body

Since he not a combat-focused Alchemist will he learn other things like dagger from hughes and gun from hawkey and hand to hand from izumi and later Fu from xing.
I do agree none combat-focused Alchemist at the beginning but what about during the middle of the story and sequel because I feel jaune should be combat-focused Alchemist when the time jaune face against father and remnants.

So Jim Sherman is still alive and might see him in the sequel. Make sure tell us why he hasn’t return to his circle to return home.

You are right about the dust, I forget that rule about dust won’t work if they are outside of remnant area and being another world count as well. Which mean any electronic device jaune have liked his scroll is dead.

What about glyph can jim note and alchemist use the symbol as a substitute for transmute circle? Create a different form of alchemist.

still I wonder if jim note have something else instead of dust and glyph like learning remnant technology like making a tv or floating ship or computer or micro chip or x-ray so on.

BTW do you watch Choujin Koukousei-tachi wa Isekai in how they build medicine Sulfonamide if not in the manga chapter 38 while the anime is
"It Seems Keine Can't Stand Naughty Boys!" 11

I don’t like the idea of jaune aura and semblance being reduced but what you say does make sense since different world apply a different way different energy flow differently.

Regarding the Sequel:

I guess that how you see it, to me having ed arm return while keeping his metal leg seem better to me. Having his arm back mean he reach his goal while keeping his metal leg a remainder of his past. So to me jaune should have one arm back as a symbol of reaching his goal while keeping one metal arm as a remainder of his past.
Sorry I can’t see how jaune is going to kill salem outright and such a short time. The way I see it will take jaune years to achieve that and I doubt he can do this by himself. He would need help like rwby, npr, ozpan group.
it will feel cheap if salem were to be beat that easily

if jaune return to his world would he bring materials like gun powder and gasoline car

I have this idea how jaune can use his bone more combat use.
Make a armor/suit like ironman nano suit like the movie avenger end game and infinity except made of bone instead of nano
How he makes the armor move like ironman is the Blood Rune, also known as a Blood Seal like Al except instead using his soul into the bones armor jaune use his aura to coating around the armor and the blood seal to make the armor move. Jaune soul is still in his body while his aura can connect the armor becoming his extra limbs and eyes and if jaune can learn to extant his aura it can also become remote control armor. The aura can become the link between blood seal and jaune soul without taking out the soul

However the best thing about his bone armor is the ability to transmute his armor like how Ed transmutes his automail arm to have a blade. Jaune can transmute his bone armor to have two more arms or make a kangaroo bone legs to run faster or make a bat wings but jaune have to use his cloths or coat to make him fly.
Of course jaune have to give up some of his armor to make them until he return them back
the-lost-memories6 chapter 4 . 2/23
Yes new chapter love it
Keep up the good work
X3runner chapter 4 . 2/23
I’m guessing jaune is going to take Ed being an idiot personally because to paraphrase a big green bug man “he’s yet another person he couldn’t save.”
Midnight49 chapter 4 . 2/23
Nah I liked the chapter, Mr. Alien has some explaining to do when he gets back in the house.
DivineWhiskey chapter 4 . 2/23
Oh dang amazing chapter. Given that Winry is 6 when Jaune gets there and Winry age when canon starts is 15 we can assume that Jaune’s age which is 17 plus 9 means that jaune is 26 when canon starts. I can definitely see jaune joining Mustang’s plan to become fuher. Also I wonder with mother hen jaune if he will be a parental figure to Ed and Al
mm chapter 3 . 2/18
if Hughes is going to die does that mean tukson will die as well

other then jaune learning how to use sword does he learn how to use dagger from hughes and gun from hawkeye

what is jaune goal try to find a way to restore his arms or return back home or simple help al and ed
Guest chapter 3 . 2/17
i just realize after you mention Hughes is going to die then does that mean Puma Faunus Tucson will die too
Gasper vladi chapter 3 . 2/19
Ohh nightingale
Guest chapter 3 . 2/16
This is nice but don't put other characters of rwby it might messed the balance of this story. But if you are making jaune go back to his world can you do like the FMA the movie.
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