Enjoying this so far! Will anything come of Naruto's small crush on Tier? She's always been a favorite of mine, water powers in manga are strangely rare...

It continues with that the story is already very good, that the truth has a great future.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

I really like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter

I fkin love this it's so cool also is Konan Tia cause man I'm hyped I enjoy badass non emotional Narutos hope he calls he's enemies trash like Ulqui

sorry but, this reads more like you're starting in the middle of a story, not the first chapter. why does he have a previous life, how is the existence of his fraccion explained? Why isn't anyone wierded out by people with bone pieces sticking out of them? Did he just live this whole other life between stealing the scroll and appearing in the clearing, otherwise why is he still deadlast?

Sorry but it all just doesn't work. You're just shoving too much into the pre-existing setup without really changing anything around them. Clumsily done. Naruto having these powers is all fine and well, forcing the other 3 characters in here too, makes him both less unique and special, and also makes for a big mess of confusion when you don't have ANYONE react to these strangers just suddenly existing and taking the place of existing characters on canon teams, rather than taking the logical route, of naruto being with his fraccion and just shoving Sai onto team 7.

Like your concept with the story, it is mostly never before. Waiting for the next chapter to come.

Nice chapter. Like how Naruto's hollow instinct still exist. Like how he fought zabuza. Wonder how he will answer the questions that have no doubt propped up. Can't wait to read more

Me thinks Naruto "sama" is going to have a whole lot more followers then just Anko lol, the dude looks scary strong with ease of how he is doing things.

great chapter!

He could just say his skills are from his clan. that why he doesn't have to give details.

This was an awesome chapter, loved it.

I am sure Kakashi is going to have many questions to annoy our Espada with, and Sasuke is going to be craving that power.

Looking forward to the next update.

This was an amazing chapter, Cirucci's part was funny, I can't wait to see what Jutsu he came up with for Anko and what Kurenai's reaction to him helping her will be. If you tell me Sasuke got a boner from Naruto's power I will die laughing, that is hilarious and terrifying at the same time. It's interesting that Naruto has his own version of Luz de la Luna, makes me wonder if he has his own version of other Espada techniques. Any way this was amazing keep up the great work and I look forward to more.

Awesome chapter! Already wanting more!

Interesting stuff looking forward to more