Reviews for A Second Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a lot of chapters released together. And it just cam to my intention that Sakura travelled back in time. I had always just assumed that she just reversed her death, not time itself. Perhaps you should consider clearing that up in the first or second chapter? Also, I like how she is slowly reconnecting with her friends but some of those reactions, such as Kiba getting hurt over Sakura not talking to him, felt a bit forced. That sort of reaction feels alright for a best friend, not a common friend. She doesn't owe them much, especially the populace in general, while her friends and those who know her should be more understanding of her loss. Anyhow, thanks for the long updates. Looking forward to how you progress the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You misspelled Tsunade as Tsundae and now I can't stop thinking about an Ice cream lecturing Sakura about medicine :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I appreciate the frequent updates. Keep em coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw man the feels tug at my hearts. It is good to see the children appreciate Sakura's efforts. I feel like Arashi got Kushina's hair and Minato's attitude. This fic gives me a bittersweet feeling. I came in for the NaruSaku but then saw that he had died but they had built something beautiful together and I don't know whether to feel happy or cry :') I do hope that Naruto is watching over them and when Sakura goes back to him we get some fluffy NS moments as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FF. net tells me that I have a message from you but it is not opening. Oh well. Liked the update. Can you clarify the ages of Sakura and her kids? It throws me off a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is nit the usual run of the mill plot is it? I am glad that you're writing and sharing it and hope you get the response you deserve. Followed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was rather worried when Sakura ran into Hinata but glad all worked out well with a calm understanding and gaining a friend back. As well as a cute dinner with the kids |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esta historia no es muy común... pero eso es lo que la hace tan buena sigue así... estaré esperando el siguiente cap |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame that it was so short, perhaps a longer chapter might have been better? Good writing overall. |
![]() ![]() I like it, and can't wait to see what's next! Thanks for writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() esta interesante, ten por seguro que si la continuas yo la leere |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ill be tracking your writin with a keen eye. |