Just recently came across this story, so far im liking what im reading.
The pacing is ok, not speeding through things, but also bot sloging through every day. I like the fact your MC is not in every scene, Harry going after Nevilles ball(cant remember name :p ) is a good example. You dont make us read something we already know the details of, also the classtomb in the latest chapter , there was only one centence from Ron, not the entire dialogue.
The posibility you opened up with him studying magic also interesting , I hope he gets rid of his wand at some point, I just think its silly and a crutch. Wands were made for easier use of magic obviously, but there are definitely benefits for using wandless magic. I mean why are wands even needed when Voldemort could obviously use magic without one and accidental magic happens all the time.

Hey, not bad of a chapter. Adam's basically in the middle of not-giving-a-shit, but not a fix-it at the same time.

Weird how you capitalize "Library" every time. Other than that, I especially like this one.

Wow, your story is amazing! I am so looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

Loving this

I love your fanfic, great pacing so far! I like how this is taking a more rational fic approach through your mc, Adam. I can't wait for him to unravel the intricacies of magic, and the parallels that are beings draw between him and Tom Riddle are intriguing to say the least, I can't imagine dumbledore would be too happy about that when he notices lol. Adam better hope the waves he makes aren't too big, as despite his best efforts to stay low-key lol, he keeps getting dragged into the fold. I'm so excited for what comes next!

I am enjoying this story so far, and liking the thought you've put into the practicalities of your Magic System. I'm looking forwards to seeing where this goes. Undying Soul out.

Need more chapters badly. Hahaha! Love this story! Looking forward to your next update!~

OK I apologize for my previous review this is actually really good. I got to say this is the first time I’ve ever seen someone do that I was thinking that you were going to poison him or something like that what do you have ham suspect other people in his house of staffed that was very clever

I was really looking forward to reading your fanfiction it sounded really good from the beginning but I don’t like this character that goes around helping others and wishes to make friends I enjoyed your first reaction your kids has no interest in them why should he I hope he doesn’t go and make friends with Granger and Potter and The weasel. So many good fanfiction’s like your start this way where the main character is independent and only cares for himself and then for some stupid reason he wants to help every single person he’s pathetic. I’m sorry if I am sounding frustrated I guess I’ve been reading so many fanfiction’s that I seem to be great just like yours and then they just become this unbearable friends with everyone and helps every pathetic character. I always like to say something positive I know that was pretty brutal what I wrote but I also got to say you have a great writing skills I do enjoy reading it it makes sense is very clear and very comprehensive which is enjoyable I just want a character who doesn’t give a shit about anyone which I thought yours was

Nice

See, I KNEW you were gonna do something interesting and realistic with the whole "I'm gonna chill and not affect anything" idea.

Nice.

~Drunk

Nice chapter thanks a lot.

Hmm...everyone is called by their last names except neville? Looks like someone was being lazy.. :)

I like this story, its dialogue feels smooth and the plot makes sense

with all my heart I hope you meet your goals.
Very good chapter.
Keep writing.
blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.