Reviews for The Bookstore
Molly Bergstrom chapter 12 . 5/7
Ahhaha! My mind immediately cast Sir Ian McKellen as this version of Dumbledore.
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 4/27
Pretty good chapter m
Endo loris1 chapter 7 . 4/19
C'est l'une des pire caricature de français/se que j'ai vu dans une fanfic, de plus Paris prend un S, sinon le reste est super. Et oui j'ai fais exprès d'écrire en français, je prend le temps de traduire votre histoire je suis sûr que vous pouvez prendre le temps de traduire une critique
BaddieDZ2 chapter 12 . 4/19
RIP this story. That's about what they always say before the authors vanish into the void. Still, followed.
tlc125 chapter 12 . 4/7
Very funny. I think Dumbledore was hilarious and completely honest for once. Best of luck. Stay safe.
pawsrule chapter 12 . 4/6
Loved Dumbledore! Hope u are able to write another chapter fairly soon!
Smithback chapter 12 . 4/6
excellent chapter so cool with albus.

, we will waith for the next chapt
Andrithir chapter 12 . 4/6
I like this Dumbledore.
Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 12 . 4/6
No worries, I am good at waiting. Though İ hope you won't take much time, I don't want you to rush. Thanks for the update, it was a nice read!
Amarylle chapter 8 . 4/6
Okay, first of all your writing style is beautiful and I quite enjoy it.

With that said though, I was excited for how things would pan out between Harry and Hermione until I've read this chapter.

I understand that Hermione must be disappointed finding out that Harry was in a relationship, but I find that her reaction was a bit... too much. She just met the guy, after all. But how Harry responded to Hermione when faced with her troubled thoughts kind of appals me. He must have sensed how uncomfortable Hermione was and should not have cajoled her into a promise that no matter how I look at it is unfair. He essentially wants her to spend time with him or at his bookshop, no regards to her attraction/feelings whatsoever, while he enjoys her company a little bit too much, if you ask me. He certainly didn't feel like an engaged man, when I read the earlier chapters.

So now I'm mixed up about how to feel about this story. I'll continue reading, hoping that I'll get over this and just enjoy the rest of the chapters. We'll see.

Either way, your writing style is brilliant and I hope I didn't offend you, I'm just venting my frustrations about the character's actions, but that's not a reflection upon you, okay. Okay. :)
ijnfleetadmiral chapter 12 . 4/6
What would've made it even funnier is if that last line had been extended to describe the deer-in-the-headlights look of a certain platinum-blonde ferret as Dumbledore singled him out. LOL
Artur Hawkwing1 chapter 12 . 4/6
So we have cheating, and albus openly saying he wants to have sex with people 50 years younger than him. NOPE! NOPE! UNFOLLOW UNFOLLOW!
Rori Potter chapter 12 . 4/6
Oh wow. Amazing. Update soon.
Sheelahdog chapter 11 . 4/2
Well that was super fun!. I can't wait to see how it pans out!
Sheelahdog chapter 8 . 4/2
Must be some. crazy relationship with Cho for him to pour it all out to a stranger. But In the other hand, maybe he never had a best friend without Hermione and Ron. Or maybe he just has Neville.
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