Reviews for The Young Wizard and The Bat: Asylum
JaDe In NighT chapter 16 . 6/18
Pretty satisfying ending. Would've liked to see them learn about Ozpin for the showdown but oh well.
notafreelancer1 chapter 15 . 6/16
I keep imagining a version of the later RWBY volumes where Oscar arrives with the gear he had from Arkham Asylum and seeing the other guys/girls' faces when they look at him. It's such a good ending that I can't wait to find out how Oscar deals with the events of Remnant with his new equipment and combat style.
MetalScizor chapter 6 . 5/30
It's so close. It's almost time for the origins. And I thought up a summary for it! Here it goes, my interprotation of the stories events in a few sentences. Here It Goes. Summary: Gotham City is a place were none is truely safe. It is a plce that thrives on criminal activity, and when unlucky people are out at night are out, murder is a posibility. However, there lies a being who both frightens the low lives and is whispered about by the men and woman as a mystery. That is the Dark Knight himself, Batman. His life is to protect the city from thugs and killers, but not by the good of his heart, but by revenge, but for what is unknown to everyone but himself and his only friend. But come Christmas Eve and a new criminal has armed himself with a group of asassins to bring the Bat to his to his demise to earn millions of cash. The cape Crusader needs to quickly end this group but while doing so, he comes face-to-face with a mysteries man. A man who, as he learns, has strange abilities and a even stranger past. Can the Batman put the asassin team back behind bars, and can he really trust this mysteries individual? And finale, can he reveal the truth the man behind the mask? I know it's a long one, but it's somes up what I think is happening in this fic. I can't wait for this next one, and I bet it's even a bigger one, then this one. For your third fanfic, I think it's gonna be a great fic. Just a few more days. Fingers crossed! Stay safe!
the mysterious Mr.E chapter 16 . 4/18
That was awesome. It would be cool if someone made another Arkham game fanfic with qrow, neo, penny, the ace ops or ironwood himself.
the mysterious Mr.E chapter 1 . 4/18
Can't wait to see how Batman reacts to Oscar and when ozpin takes control every once in awhile.
MetalScizor chapter 16 . 4/13
Like the name? Good, because I'll keep it! I'm glad how the story ended, even though I'm so confused about the epilogue. To my understanding about this epilogue, Arkham City and Arkham Knight might be to hard to write since it doesn't involve Oscar or Oz until there respective moments, so Arkham Origins seems like a step in the write direction! And the title seems to fit quite well, The Young Bat and the Wizard. Reverse rolls! This was one heck of a ride, but like all adventures, they all come to an end. But I'm confident that you can finish this next adventure, and it will see the finish line of completion. I'm really excited to read this prequel when it comes out with chapter 1, and I'm excited about certain parts like the fight with Deathstroke, and the battle with Tn-1 Bane! But make sure to keep in mind, overpowered characters, as I have learned the hard way **Burns every copy of Twilight over the stove** are uninteresting like you wouldn't believe, because if they don't struggle against villains or just doesn't get severely injured for character development moments just isn't interesting to read, and I have that worry with Ozbin. I hope that he isn't overpowered and that Batman keeps his moments like the battle with Deathstroke, the Joker moments, not making Batman seem less important in investagations and detective parts, and Alfred's death / not death. I know it's a lot to ask, but I hope you understand. And on the topic of Batman Arkham stuff, there's a official written version of Batman: Arkham Knight. It's really good, and I think you'll enjoy it! So, once again, thank you for this story. It's funny to think that there is a lot of RWBY Arkham Asylum versions of this kind, and only two of them are completed! I hope all those get finished, but I have a feeling that won't happen. Arkham Asylum, even though it did have flaws, was a success for Batman on video games, and before Arkham, the only game that came close to that was Batman for the Nes. With that said, I can hardly wait until June, so while you write chapter 1 of this story, make sure to improve on a bit of spelling and read over the chapter at least once, so you have a perfect story. Before I go, I'll pop in my copy of Donkey Kong 64. **Turns on N64 and listens to Dk Rap. And then there's Chunky! He's dead.** That wasn't suppose to happen. Anyway, goodbye until Origins is here. Stay safe and stay awesome **I deffinitly quoted someone** Nice day to you, captain! **Huh! Dk! Chunky's dead!** Final rating: 8.5/10
SargentEpsilon chapter 16 . 4/12
A rather unexpected but still enjoyable epilogue. Does make me curious how many unnecessary problems in the City and Knight sagas could be avoided if Oscar and Ozpin were present. Judging by this, Batman would still be the one to collect the blood sample from Ra's and face Scarecrow the final time. But those nights offer a LOT of opportunities for the vessel of Ozma to step in and lighten the load. Even quite a few in Origins. Speaking of, looking forward to it.
michjman chapter 16 . 4/12
This was an incredible story from beginning to end, great work man. Can't wait for Origins. See ya in June.
Andromeda chapter 16 . 4/12
Can you make the game with another RWBY character like Qrow or Penny?
geraldwhusted chapter 16 . 4/12
Awesome epilogue! What Oz and Oscar did here reminds me of what Minato and Kushina did in Naruto. And I LOVE how you switched whom is young in the title for Origins, it got a chuckle out of me. See ya in Origins!
Jp721 chapter 16 . 4/12
This has been an amazing story and I can’t wait until you post origins. This is just a suggestion but how about after Knight when Wayne Manor is destroyed you have Bruce go to Remnant and start a life there? The Gods of light and darkness could make him younger and have him help the others take down Salem and go on other adventures with them along the way. Also he could help them in training
Jamieoeyes chapter 16 . 4/12
Beautiful absolutely beautiful this is a masterpiece and even if you don't do the other Arkham game this chapter more then made up for it and of course batman telling scarecrow what Ozpin and Oscar told him about fear totally nailed it I can't wait for the prequal keep it up mate and make more like this
Sai Kunai Blade chapter 15 . 4/10
This was an incredible story. I'm kind of surprised Oscar is going home now, rather than having him go through the full series, but it's still pretty cool. That was a really interesting addition to have Joker dose Harley's hyenas with the TITAN formula. It also makes sense that, ultimately, Batman was the one to finish Joker. This all tied together perfectly, my friend. You did an unbelievably amazing job.
michjman chapter 15 . 4/9
This was an excellent chapter. I kinda wished Joker had a chance to meet Ozpin again but still a great chapter. Amazing job as always man.
guest chapter 15 . 4/9
Okay, this isn't the time to review the name, but it's to clear up the massive problem. You see, I've been using this thing I've used for different purposes. I won't say why I need it because I don't want to **Impareed** Okay there I told you. But yeah1 after a while I couldn't write for a long time to comlletely review. So you know. Anyway, I've said thank you enough, and please ignore the Kirby thing. I'll fix that: **First you draw a circle, then you dot the eyes, add a great big smile, and then presto! It's Kirby!** That's from Kirby's Adventure, if your curious, (which I think you're not curious). But I really mean what I said. You've done fantastic. This is the person who said Zelda and Kirby and googles and **tosses a copy of Sonic 06 in the trash** So yeah I'm going to reveal what my new name is. Tell me your opinion. It's okay if you think it's bad or passible, but here it is. It's MetalScizor. No numbers, just that. Tell me your opinion! It's pretty rainy where I am, so I'm just going to wait to see what happens with Batman or Oscar. For now, my advice is, if your feeling down, play some Kirby! That's not my advice, but that's all I got. I'm rambling, but this review makes more sense then the last one, so read this one. The double Titan fight was probably the biggest twist of them all with the hyinas (is that how you spell it) and it was fresh but not bad. Good job, and yes, I am pleased about the final fight. It was fathfull to the game's fight, but I will quote the Completionist: Batman Arkham Asylum wasn't great in the end, but the main part of it was the adventure to the end. I'll see the next chapter! Bye!
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