Reviews for One Breath Apart
HellraiserFan1993 chapter 1 . 7/13
laura! OMG seriously.. this was beautiful like UGH! i remember you told me about an unboundpinhead/kristy idea you had but i never would had believed it was this heart breaking.. D; it was perfect tho,. kristy unaware of his 'unbound' nature but knowing somethins up with him.. unbound fighting against his own instability and lack of discipline to protect her even though he wants her to join him.. both realizing they love one another, kristy's empathy for him being trapped in the pillar and wanting to save him...just perfection. like you i can't get enough of this version of pinhead and kristy just the concept of it alone. SIGH

you brilliantly envisioned a moment that i'd happily watch in the actual film,.. and could even see happening. i would absolutely love to see more of these snapshots.. will they share a moment together when he's escaped from the pillar? will we see how she was lured into Jps room to begin with? will there be a kiss?! ugh i'm so excited for this.. i'm only sorry that it took me this freakin long to review it! loved it laura, hope you can update real soon!

-katie
Idreamtofmanderleyagain chapter 1 . 3/8
Hey, this was a good read! Loving the emotions you're exploring here, of Kirsty having trust this in him after the events of H2, and him not quite trusting himself at the same time because of how he's been changed. It's a unique and compelling emotional dynamic that I'd like to see more of. You should definitely continue this!
Hellraiser8 chapter 1 . 3/3
I love this story and reading about unbound Pinhead.
Rurrlock-God of Power chapter 1 . 2/21
This was such a well-written story. I could see there being more chapters for this, as you said, with Kirsty's POV as well and maybe seeing if she does return to Pinhead again and what she will tell him. You did such an incredible job of describing Pinhead's conflicted feelings towards seeing Kirsty again and her wanting to help him. It is a fascinating concept to see the interactions between her and unbound Pinhead because, as you said, they never got to meet in the film. There is a real sense of tragedy with this idea as Pinhead tries to warn Kirsty to keep away because he knows he's not the same as when they last met. I would love to see more snapshots set within this storyline.

You did such a great job with this idea, and it's really cool how quickly you managed to get it up. Really well done. Love you. xxx
InkWorthy chapter 1 . 2/19
First of all: Ow. Second: Wow. Third: OW.

But in all seriousness, what a great piece of writing. I loved the shift in Unbound's internal narrative; from almost bursting to get to work to actively fighting his nature in order to protect Kirsty, it was just excellent. I also love how he deliberately plays up his imposing presence to ward her away, even knowing how unlikely it was to take for very long. I'd love to see more snapshots of this version of events, but in the meantime, this works wonderfully as a little piece of what could have been.
Nikkette chapter 1 . 2/19
Ahhhhh you posted! :D

It seems that you and InkWorthy are the only ones feeding us Pinsty addicts’ needs these days, haha, and I’m glad for it! You two have such lovely ways of writing, especially when it comes to the fascinating pair of Pinsty ;)

I really enjoyed this! It played out like a movie scene in my head, and I felt as though I were witness to a deleted scene of sorts for HR III. It’s been ages since I’ve seen that one, but this makes me want to watch it again

I, too, am curious as to how Kirsty would have interacted with an Unbound Pinhead. He wouldn’t have harmed her, I don’t think, even in the state he was in, but he definitely would have been like, “Kirsty, not now, you’re killing my vibe.” I think, hahaha XD

This gives me some ideas for new art, and inspiration for going back to some of my old Pinsty projects, so thank you for that! This was a real treat for Valentine’s month!.